Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
What other measures do you think might be effective?
Our planet is increasingly polluted day by day and many consider the rise in the number of cars as the main culprit behind it.They argue that making petrol prices go high is the most appropriate method to resolve the problem of pollution and increasing traffic.I don’t agree with this argument because beside its use in transportation ,fossil fuels are also used in many other important sectors. In my opinion switching to the renewable sources of energy and investment in public transportation are more effective solutions.
Many countries economy is dependent on petrol because of it’s use for different purposes like generation of electricity, textile industry and in aviation industry etc.This is exemplified by the dependence of Pakistan on petrol, where around for 40% of total electric power is generated by it and the prices if go high can crumble it’s economy.
There are many sustainable solutions to these problems. Investing in renewable sources of energy is one of them. Countries should put both their efforts and money in this sector because this can significantly lower pollution.For instance, cars that run on solar energy have no emission of hazardous smoke and pollutants.
The traffic problem can be managed affectively by funnelling the funds to public transport sector and by constructing trains and metro bus services. As an illustration ,Metro bus built in Lahore has affectively controlled the heavy traffic by lowering the use of cars and in turn leading to less pollution.
In conclusion, this essay believes that raising petrol prices is not a permanent solution to increasing pollution and traffic jams because many economies depends on it. These problems can be addressed by working on renewable sources of energy and up gradation of public transport.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34736842105 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96105011611 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585964912281 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.054344251 49.4020404114 221% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 152.4 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113203850736 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436472751206 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039538080972 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0638751511091 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400251426699 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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