Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest years of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
What is the happiest time of our lives has become debatable issue.
Some individuals contend that youth years are the most vivid years of our life, while others assured that adulthood have more to offer, in terms of happiness. From my perspective , although , we cherish memories from olden days, adult years are the happiest.
People who favoring teenage years over adult years single out two reasons.
The first reason is that youths are generally exempt from responsibility, meaning that they are not expected to earn money to make ends meet or think about bills. Hence, they spend time concentrating on other things , such as hang out with friends or playing video games. The other reason they referring to is that at that very age young people fall in love and this cherished memories caused many people to value teenage years .In short, aforementioned reasons could seem as the happiest time lap for some people.
However, l adhere to the viewpoint that adult years are challenging and fulfilling which are synonymous of happiness for others. To begin with, at that age people start family, which tern to be instrumental in almost every human kind to find happiness. What can be as challenging an joyful than marry to a person whom you are fall in love and have a baby.in almost every culture and religion family concept accepted as the definition of happiness. To continue with, adult people privilege over teens is that adults are in authority to make decisions and reap all consequences. This accepted as personal challenge an interesting for many people as they grow as personality and pick up wise lessons which life brigs.
In conclusion, peoples opinion differ as to which age should be accepted as the happiest teenage years or adulthood. From my point adulthood more worthwhile .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, so, while, as to, in conclusion, in short, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00666666667 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61083103856 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586666666667 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1495721999 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.285714286 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301992689714 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999076167088 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726310124843 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157586749769 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689294938171 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.