In an attempt to improve highway safety, Prunty County last year lowered its speed limit from 55 to 45 miles per hour on all county highways. But this effort has failed: the number of accidents has not decreased, and, based on reports by the highway patrol, many drivers are exceeding the speed limit. Prunty County should instead undertake the same kind of road improvement project that Butler County completed five years ago: increasing lane widths, resurfacing rough highways, and improving visibility at dangerous intersections. Today, major Butler County roads still have a 55 mph speed limit, yet there were 25 percent fewer reported accidents in Butler County this past year than there were five years ago.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The author argue that decreasing the speed limit from 55 to 45 miles per hour for safer driver in highway is unsuccessful and ineffective for protecting drivers from dangerous incident. The sources he referenced such as precedent of constant number of accident with velocity limitation, examples of butler county seem pretty powerful. however, above argument should discuss the factors what he fails to consider and need to be cited to strengthen the inference. The following essay will deal with the details of extra keys of it.
First, he assume the consistency trouble on traffic has maintained. Nevertheless the candidate who answered the question from the organization, the credibility of methods to gather opinion from various drivers are not clearly specified in the paragraph. Did the employee the telephone or paper survey? If then, the strategy to recognize whether they have driver license or not be hardly implemented throughout them. Some people can lie to get the rewards or the respondents will not focus completely on their responding.
On the top of that, the author indicate the significant butler county roads is precedent to keep the limitation of speed of car, but the results from there represents even the fewer accidents in Butler county happened rather than five years ago. Although the butler country has been successes to execute the decrement of traffic accident keeping speed limit, the situation to the Prunty county perhaps totally are distinct. For example, the reports and the number in the paragraph does not describes other potential key to decrease the accident rate. other law legislation such as enforcement of punishment on traffic accident would be supposed to inference same results.
Lastly, The author suggest the developement of Prunty country as an example of project to support his stance. Admittedly, expanding the lane widths and reconstructing rough highways and developing visibility at dangerous intersections may reduce the rate of traffic accident on the Prunty county. Speaking of the efficiency between two ways, limiting maximum speed to 45 do not require any cost and have possibility to cut back the traffic accidents. Meanwhile, the methods suggested for Prunty county are more idealistic, but not realistic to realize in the real world because we have the limited budget to invest our entire society.
In conclusion, the author say the limitation to lowered speed of car would affect little influence with the support of examples of Prunty county and butler county. even the means offered seem enough to support his stance, however, the argument will be more powerful with the things proposed in this essay.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 426 350
No. of Characters: 2202 1500
No. of Different Words: 236 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.543 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.169 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.698 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 182 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 136 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 88 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 59 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.625 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.01 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.688 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.294 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.547 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.079 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
The author argue that decreasing the speed limit from 55...
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Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rous incident. The sources he referenced such as precedent of constant number of ...
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Line 1, column 337, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
... of butler county seem pretty powerful. however, above argument should discuss the fact...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 532, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l with the details of extra keys of it. First, he assume the consistency trouble...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'assumes'.
Suggestion: assumes
... of extra keys of it. First, he assume the consistency trouble on traffic has ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 69, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
...ency trouble on traffic has maintained. Nevertheless the candidate who answered the question...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 491, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'describe'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: describe
...nd the number in the paragraph does not describes other potential key to decrease the acc...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 491, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'describe'
Suggestion: describe
...nd the number in the paragraph does not describes other potential key to decrease the acc...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 552, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Other
...tial key to decrease the accident rate. other law legislation such as enforcement of ...
^^^^^
Line 19, column 165, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
...les of Prunty county and butler county. even the means offered seem enough to suppor...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, lastly, may, nevertheless, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion, speaking of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 28.8173652695 49% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 55.5748502994 112% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 16.3942115768 98% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2265.0 2260.96107784 100% => OK
No of words: 426.0 441.139720559 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31690140845 5.12650576532 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54310108192 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7631969808 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 204.123752495 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575117370892 0.468620217663 123% => OK
syllable_count: 695.7 705.55239521 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.76447105788 137% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2666301913 57.8364921388 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.210526316 119.503703932 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4210526316 23.324526521 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.15789473684 5.70786347227 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 6.88822355289 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252240752562 0.218282227539 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620562941969 0.0743258471296 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590057585231 0.0701772020484 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126717234397 0.128457276422 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615929486869 0.0628817314937 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.3799401198 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.3550499002 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.5979740519 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.32208582834 113% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 98.500998004 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.