"The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company. "According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually increased during the past year. Clearly, the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation
According to the memo from the advertising director of Super Screen Movie Production Company the problem for people not attending their production company is advertising. So in order to do overcome this problem , Super Screen are going to devote a greater share of its budget to advertising. However, before doing so the company should address the following questions:
What if people are not interested in genere created by Super Screen production? Different types of people are interested in different kinds of genres, some people's liking are very specific. If the movies produced by the Super Screen does not interest peoples liking , they might avoid watching it no matter how good the reviews are. If this is taken into consideration then the proposed conclusion might not be effective.
Secondly, what if there is another movie release who's reviews are equally or more good? Movie clashes happens alot of time in movie industry. These movie clashes affect the business of the movie production company. So it is possible that the movie release by Super Screen production might have clash with another production. This factor should also be taken into consideration before implementing the scheme.
Third question that must be answer is that what if people don't like the casting?
It happen a lot of time that when a specific actor is hated his/her movies fails no matter how great he has acted in movie. Maybe Super Screen production have hired an actor who's fanbase is very weak. So interested of allocating a great budget into advertising, Super Screen should hire popular actors.
Above questions clearly states that the solution recommended by the Super Screen is not very good. So maybe before implementing this solution, Super Screen should take the above questions into consideration.If they are able to provide satisfactory solutions to the above question, they might increase their collection next year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 11.1786427146 9% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 28.8173652695 76% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 2260.96107784 72% => OK
No of words: 309.0 441.139720559 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28155339806 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69326724335 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 204.123752495 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514563106796 0.468620217663 110% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 705.55239521 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 19.7664670659 86% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.3146068345 57.8364921388 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 119.503703932 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1764705882 23.324526521 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35294117647 5.70786347227 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317261658785 0.218282227539 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107326836845 0.0743258471296 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873908001697 0.0701772020484 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149286330706 0.128457276422 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793443693206 0.0628817314937 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.3799401198 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.3550499002 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.5979740519 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 98.500998004 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.