We recommend that Monarch Books open a café in its store. Monarch, having been in business at the same location for more than twenty years, has a large customer base because it is known for its wide selection of books on all subjects. Clearly, opening the café would attract more customers. Space could be made for the café by discounting the children’s book section, which will be probably becomes less popular given that the most recent national census indicated a significant decline in the percentage of the population under age ten. Opening a café will allow Monarch to attract more customers and better compete with Regal Books, which recently opened its own café.
After reading the essay prompt, we can definitely understand that Monarch Books is a well-known and successful bookstore: it has a large customer base, it has been in the same location for two decades and it has a wide and complete stock of books in various subjects. In the prompt, Monarch Books is suggested to open a café inside the stores, by doing this they will attract more customers. Nevertheless, in the following essay I will analyze what I consider to be the flaws in the argument and solution suggested by the prompt.
The author assures that opening a café would attract more customers. In the current situation there is not a clear statement that customer´s affluency has decreased because they do not have a café. A good measure to analyze customer’s affluency is simple tracking how many customers enter the bookstore and how many sales are done per day. If there is a noticeable decrease of the number of clients and number of sales, some measures must be taken at once.
It is a risky move to eliminate a complete section in the store. Children´s book are essential for the business. There is a worldwide tendency occurring right now that people are searching to return to basics, to indulge a simple and technology free life. Families with children are looking for outdoors activities, cultural doings, in general actions that prevent a child to be on a screen all day long. Right now, Monarch books offer that option to their clients. Parents are able to go with their children to enjoy a nice and didactical time in the bookstore.
Another important issue to analyze in the situation is what has happened to sales in Monarch Books from the moment that Regal Books opened a café.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 295 350
No. of Characters: 1375 1500
No. of Different Words: 162 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.144 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.661 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.546 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 97 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 79 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 33 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.071 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.4 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.214 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.322 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.534 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.048 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at Regal Books opened a café.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, nevertheless, so, well, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.9520958084 39% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 11.1786427146 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 28.8173652695 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 55.5748502994 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 2260.96107784 64% => OK
No of words: 295.0 441.139720559 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89830508475 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77281919453 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 204.123752495 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55593220339 0.468620217663 119% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 705.55239521 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.8473053892 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9834398464 57.8364921388 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.214285714 119.503703932 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 23.324526521 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.70786347227 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325703157902 0.218282227539 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954090791642 0.0743258471296 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923029824469 0.0701772020484 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179877938006 0.128457276422 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773123688084 0.0628817314937 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.3799401198 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.3550499002 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.197005988 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.5979740519 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 98.500998004 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 12.3882235529 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.1389221557 93% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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