In this age of intensive media coverage, it is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
In this day and age, for any person to become truly an idol or a hero it is necessary that he or she prove himself amongst the rest of the world. He needs to achieve success through the work .Due to the highly competitive nature of our world today, it has people have resorted to unfair and illegal means to achieve said success and so it is becoming increasing easy to expose their schemes and manipulations. Even, their personal life is coming under scrutiny.
For someone to become or remain an idol or hero in the public’s eye, it is necessary that every aspect of his life can stand under the public scrutiny. With paparazzi, blogs, etc. it is impossible for the celebrities to hide a mistake. Even cover ups at the government level are now exposed by various sites like WikiLeaks. The various forms of media are not only concerned with their present mistakes but they also dig into the person’s past to uncover every skeleton he or she has tried to hide.
It is very difficult with these forces at work to make sure that a person’s image is so spotless that he can be considered a hero because often he might be a hero when his present actions are considered but his past may demean him in the eyes of the world. But there are people like Sachin Tedulkar, APJ who have proved themselves to be the hero and an idol .They have been able hold on to their place on the top of the pedestal. But if we take the example of Tiger Woods, even though he is a great sportsman, his personal choices have made him loose his place as an idol to many.
So even though, it is perhaps unfair of us to place such high expectations on people ,there are people who have made no mistake and are always stayed true to their cause, there are people who have achieved this and it gives us hope that we might still have heroes among us.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 102, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'proves'.
Suggestion: proves
...r a hero it is necessary that he or she prove himself amongst the rest of the world. ...
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Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...eeds to achieve success through the work .Due to the highly competitive nature of ...
^^
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Due
...ds to achieve success through the work .Due to the highly competitive nature of our...
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Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ed themselves to be the hero and an idol .They have been able hold on to their pla...
^^
Line 5, column 365, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
... themselves to be the hero and an idol .They have been able hold on to their place o...
^^^^
Line 5, column 551, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...man, his personal choices have made him loose his place as an idol to many. So ev...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...o place such high expectations on people ,there are people who have made no mistak...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 2235.4752809 67% => OK
No of words: 341.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40762463343 5.05705443957 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38099691142 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 215.323595506 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530791788856 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.3659429163 60.3974514979 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.25 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4166666667 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.41666666667 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0908607845762 0.243740707755 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359802111527 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463161322683 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0581652625745 0.150359130593 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176620337771 0.0667264976115 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 14.1392134831 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.1639044944 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 100.480337079 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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