the best ideas arise from a passionate intrest in commonplace things.
Idea is combination of lot of things like creativity,logic and standardization. if person have all these in your idea thien it going to be the best. person get best ideas when he/she is familiar with that topic or intrested in commonplace things.first person need to hsve intrest follwed by he/she will get knowledge. i will stongly agree with the authour.
For an example in a product designing web template will be disigned by ux/ui designers.if you bring any backend developer or java developer to make web template. can company can get creative templates from the developer compare to ux/ui designers? obivously no. they are not familier or not intresting in doing frontend web templates.company wont get satisfactory result. if ux/ui designer designs company will get more effecient and creative ideas to create web templates. intrest palys major role to get best ideas.
Many of the psychologists said that person shold be forced to learn things which there were intrested in so that they will get best ideas that will bring success in there life. one can follow there passion so that they can feel comfort in that things and they get best ideas to lead life.for an example in a marketing company there are two departments one for the electronics and one for non-electronics.new electrical product arrived in the company and both the departments are going to sell this product in public. person from non-electronics dont know how it works so that he wont get any effective idea to sell product and person from electroinc departments knows how it works .in that case person who knows how it work will get an best idea how to sale the product when compared to other. knowledge on the product is more importent to get best ideas.
in the conclusion,everyone will get an idea but effective ideas comes when a person is passionated or intrested in comman things. so he/she has to follow there intresting things or passion to get more ideas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 329.0 442.535393258 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9179331307 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97980874712 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465045592705 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 503.1 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.1491109393 60.3974514979 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.866666667 118.986275619 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 5.21951772744 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 7.80617977528 384% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28165981589 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103028883164 0.0831039109588 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709454335421 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202857294912 0.150359130593 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723077060216 0.0667264976115 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.