The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
The young generation of today is the vital leader of tomorrow. So, it is so important to pass the legacy by preparing them for taking leadership in government, industry and other fields. And instilling a sense of cooperation, rather than competition in them is very important.
Human is the social being. The institutions of the society, including government, industry and so forth, are very much established by the bunch of human groups. In those groups, different people play different roles. By assisting each other, it becomes easy for all of them to play their certain roles.
Generally, every institution is based on several departments and disciplines. For that, there creates an interdisciplinary relation. Thus, there is a little room for competition as competition creates an environment to have a mind of defeating another, where there is nothing to beat in a particular discipline or in an interdisciplinary relation. So that, a cooperative sense is much important here.
Furthermore, to achieve a goal, collective assessment and deliberation are necessary. If anyone in an executive group has a mentality to beat another in the very same group, there will be a negative impact and it damages coherence, which is very vital.
So, young people should be given necessary insights of cooperation. The current curricular system is mostly about competition. There are competitions for marks, scores, prizes both in the academic system and co-curricular system. These systems develop a sense of defeating others by any means. So, there should be curriculum activities which also develop the sense of cooperation, for instance, group projects and so on.
There are also certain scenarios where a sense of competition is also important, for instance, getting a job, possessing a position in an institution etc. So it is not necessary to be extreme about these situations to be only agreeing with instilling the sense of cooperation and rejecting the competition sense, as the sense of competition is not avoidable.
In conclusion, young people definitely should be given a sense of cooperation in order to achieve success collectively as well as a little sense of competition.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 219, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...to be extreme about these situations to be only agreeing with instilling the sense of cooperatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, still, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 12.9106741573 209% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1851.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 348.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31896551724 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23915076851 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494252873563 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.3267510578 60.3974514979 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1428571429 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04761904762 5.21951772744 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268909309288 0.243740707755 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0767779100182 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062549104752 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132364472078 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885109917717 0.0667264976115 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 100.480337079 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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