The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
By instilling a sense of cooperation rather than competition, a society can prepare its young people for leadership in various fields in the best way possible.
Cooperation among its denizens is one of the pillars on which the whole structure of a society rests upon. If a leader is cooperative and is open to others, then he/she can relate with them, know there needs and most importantly will work for them with all its heart. Not only he can understand better but in such a leader people see their idol and are willing to comply with him/her at any point. People feel empowered by being in contact with such a person. Therefore, it is very necessary for its leaders to cooperate with others around them and work for the betterment of his/her society. This can only be achieved if an inate sense of cooperation has been nurtured in a leader from a young age.
Furthermore, a sense of cooperation is also important for the overall growth of the society. No society in the history has ever survived if there is an internal strife between the general public and its leadership. And there too the primary reason is the lack of candidness that people feel. People can very easily detect an air of arrogance or tyranny, and will try to revolt and overturn the ruler if that pleases them, for the sake of fighting against oppression. Also, competition promotes in its participant the audaciousness to use any unfair means to gain power even if that means to throwing others off the cliff. Hence, again bolstering the point that for good leadership a higher level of cooperation is required, which can be cultivated over time if started at a younger age.
In both of the above discussed cases, it is only the society that has to take the mantle and put forward its efforts to teach cooperation over competitiveness to its children.
Competitiveness is not always bad. This is one great method of bringing out the best among the people. A leader must be resolute, strong and firm in its decisions, and to filter out the best candidates for leadership roles we need competition.
Conclusively, competition is only good upto a point of filteration but for the smoother working of the society and production of great leaders, cooperation plays a far bigger role and therefore must be taught from early ages of a child.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...there is an internal strife between the general public and its leadership. And there too the p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, if, so, still, then, therefore, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1912.0 2235.4752809 86% => OK
No of words: 402.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75621890547 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77021519479 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522388059701 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 607.5 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3919185172 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.222222222 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 5.21951772744 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273489297002 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876478099812 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828159695894 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160535048234 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107719680463 0.0667264976115 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 100.480337079 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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