The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
A good leader is someone who takes his team forward along with himself. The notion put forward by the argument that instilling a sense of cooperation instead of competition among the young people can prepare them for leadership role, is something that I agree to, but refrain to completely support because of its 'all and nothing' nature. While it is unquestioned that synergies achieved in any environment can do wonders, a healthy competition can sometimes add to the excellence.
The role of a leader is not just to achieve the best he could do, but to get best out of the team he is entitled to. If the leader is well versed with training methodologies and co-operate well among its team the output will be more that what can be achieved by individual efforts.
Also, competition in a workplace can lead individual to involve in malpractices and treachery to get through their way. There have been numerous instances where an individual's pine for power has led to the downfall of the complete organisation.
However, in a healthy competition leaders when subjected to tough environment can be moulded in a better way. For example, in a democratic nation, leaders are elected through polls, wherein the parties involved have to be at their best so as to come to power. In such a scenario, the feeling of healthy competition can help shape the motives of the leaders. Competitive spirit in these instances is important to keep things under check.
In conclusion, it is important that a leader co-operates well among his disciples/ team member and thrive to compete to prove its superiority.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 237, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...rties involved have to be at their best so as to come to power. In such a scenario, the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 2235.4752809 60% => OK
No of words: 270.0 442.535393258 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98888888889 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90909599466 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577777777778 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 704.065955056 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.140635988 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.25 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 23.4991977007 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145066061023 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481121867189 0.0831039109588 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698716992917 0.0758088955206 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0742317506618 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484262551598 0.0667264976115 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 14.1392134831 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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