"The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition."
Before move further in topic we should know about the term "competition" and "cooperation" both are the contradictory part of each other.Competition basically measure the ability of two whether cooperation shows harmony between two.we know that world is of young generation they are the devloper of this.we should prepare them to serve socity and nation in positive direction.but i am more ar less agree with topic.
Firstly it is important to teach good values and ethics to young generation to lead the world in beneficiary manner.by serving harmony one can lead the world in any area.
As we know Mahatma Ghandhi who was well known for his non voilece movement which led him to get freedom from britiish goverment.cooperation not only works in goverment but also work with business deals as we cooperate with the client our business relation always be at altitude.
On the same side competition is necessey for a eagerneess to do well. competition always change a mindset of person mostprobably in positive way.we have seem competition in our daily life during the poll a great eagarness between political pary. to instilling young people for leadership in any area of serving nation they should have a positive attitude towards competion that is for doing well for nation.
As we know that everything in universe has its positive and negetive impact so in same way competition and cooperation have its positive and negetive effect.
we can conclude that the cooperation and competition both should be instill in young generation for dealing with world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Competition
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...ty and nation in positive direction.but i am more ar less agree with topic. ...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e same side competition is necessey for a eagerneess to do well. competition alwa...
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Suggestion: Competition
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Message: Use past participle here: 'seemed'.
Suggestion: seemed
...on mostprobably in positive way.we have seem competition in our daily life during th...
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Suggestion: To
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Suggestion: We
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Message: Did you mean 'instilled'?
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...peration and competition both should be instill in young generation for dealing with wo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 2235.4752809 60% => OK
No of words: 255.0 442.535393258 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27058823529 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33671339585 2.79657885939 119% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 215.323595506 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 704.065955056 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.92686156 60.3974514979 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.0 118.986275619 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.875 23.4991977007 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.21951772744 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145140410548 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750354376273 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064719596726 0.0758088955206 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748747250901 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532616948091 0.0667264976115 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 14.1392134831 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 48.8420337079 65% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 100.480337079 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 11.8971910112 172% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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