Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The statement claims that for the growth and development of major cities, the government must provide them sufficient financial support. However, I am not completely agreeing with the reason provided for the claim. Scope of the claim is greatly generalized and is based on premise of weak reasoning. How can only cities are responsible for preservation and generation of that nationa's cultural traditions? The reason does not completely hold the accurateness in many context.
One cannot say that only major cities hold the nation's cultural trends. What about the rural arts and traditions? Many a times, a nation's cultural pride is upholded only by its villages. The richness and diversity seen in rural localities might not be found in the major cities. For example, in India, many villages of Rajasthan and Gujarat are the epitome of cultural dresses like the famous 'Bandhani'. This not only implies to India, but across the globe, history has proved that the best of all arts were alawys born in the rural and not in urban culture.
A nation's cultural trend is not always generated in the urban cities. Infact, it is the rural-side of the country where cultural trends are born. For example, the tradition of Garba or Bhangra were developed mostly in the rural locatities of Gujarat and Punjab respectively. Today's urbane localities might uphold them, but those trends were no generated there.
Another major flaw in the claim is its weak linkage of financial support with cultural trends' preservation. How firmly one can assert that the adequate financial funding will ultimately preserve and generate cultural norms.? The whole financial funding of any major city might not be centered around its cultural trends. The urban cities have their own series of financial needs that may not have any direct linkage with the cultural trends. Even if adequate funding is provided to them, there is no gurantee that the cultural trends will be preserved. For example, the city of Delhi needs more urbane plans like roads, bridges and public transportation facilities. Any amount of access funding might gets directed to those mentioned plans, rather than the cultural preservation.
Even after the above stated agruments, we must not forget the 'other side of the coin'. There are various examples where major cities indeed played an important role in preserving country's cultural norms. The best example is the ancient city of Rome. The Rome is currently recognised as the centre of Roman culture. The proper financial support to this historic Roman city has lead to preservation of architectural culture of Italy. The above reasoning support the claim upto certain extent.
Thus, from the above claims and arguments one may conclude that connecting major cities with nation's cultural trends is a vague claim. There is a possibility that urban centres might hold influential cultural norms, but providing them adequate financial fundings may not gurantee its preservation and generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 463, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun context seems to be countable; consider using: 'many contexts'.
Suggestion: many contexts
...not completely hold the accurateness in many context. One cannot say that only major citie...
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Line 2, column 120, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a time' or simply 'times'?
Suggestion: a time; times
...out the rural arts and traditions? Many a times, a nations cultural pride is upholded o...
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Line 2, column 129, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
...ural arts and traditions? Many a times, a nations cultural pride is upholded only by its ...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: A nation; Nations
...in the rural and not in urban culture. A nations cultural trend is not always generated ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ognised as the centre of Roman culture. The proper financial support to this histor...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tion of architectural culture of Italy. The above reasoning support the claim upto ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... support the claim upto certain extent. Thus, from the above claims and argument...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2507.0 2235.4752809 112% => OK
No of words: 481.0 442.535393258 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21205821206 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68313059816 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62183511869 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.476091476091 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 792.9 704.065955056 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 14.0 4.99550561798 280% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2270537978 60.3974514979 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.5666666667 118.986275619 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0333333333 23.4991977007 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.46666666667 5.21951772744 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314202420841 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874528808465 0.0831039109588 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656656436361 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1732310161 0.150359130593 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603108624343 0.0667264976115 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.8971910112 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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