College students should base their choice of a field of study on the availability of jobs in that field.
The issue being discussed focusses on a very generalised topic that the students should choose their career in those fields where there is abundance of jobs.
The college education gives the choice to the students to opt for the respective course however the immediate option of the jobs may not be available in their
field of study.
I am of the firm view that it is the interest and penchant of a particular student in a particular subject which should be the driving force in choosing the field of study rather
than the immediate gratification on getting by the job. Because the excellence in the field can only be attained only when the student devotes his steadfast dedication
to the field of his interest. History is replete with examples that the greatest of inventions have been made only when the scientist or the researcher have
devoted their life on a particular field of study. It was only the love for the nature and to observe the things that provided the impetus to Newton
to postulate groundbreaking laws of gravitation.
The field of Engineering and Medical attracts many students for the easy availability of jobs. But the quality of the engineers and medical students have never been very
enthusiastic. There should also be a research on the quality of jobs available in the field of the choice.
However, it has been observed that easy availability of jobs in a particular field attracts students due to the constraints of finances. If the students is
financially not sound it will be imperative for him to opt for the subject which can easily fetch a quick job for him just after completing his/her studies.
Hence it can be easily inferred that though there may be easy availabilty of jobs in a particular field but the quality may not be superior.
The students should focus on their interest before choosing the field of study. Only when they are satisfied that they can devote themselves in a particular field and
contribute significantly into the field of their choice, then they should make the final decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1725.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 349.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94269340974 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74148103436 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 215.323595506 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452722063037 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.29207874 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.214285714 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9285714286 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.21951772744 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.97078651685 282% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442365888894 0.243740707755 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180337684773 0.0831039109588 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104789853671 0.0758088955206 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165370872069 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089477974494 0.0667264976115 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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