Competition for high grades seriously limits the quality of learning at all levels of education.

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RUNNING BACK AFTER THE DECENT FIGURES OF GRADES MIGH...
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...ducation societies are running behind the marks and percentages rather than fo...
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...percentages rather than focusing on the individuals growth and their contributions to the ...
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...ut not a mandate to judge and measure ones intelligence. parents sometimes prod...
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...he truth. most freshmanns in the college hope that i need to invent something new...
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...ething new and get a patent for his work,societies condemn their children saying pleas...
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...r the betterment of mankind. so,striving for marks should not be the essence of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, well, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 309.0 442.535393258 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46278317152 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16156551193 2.79657885939 113% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62783171521 0.4932671777 127% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 6.24550561798 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 23.0359550562 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.405997552 60.3974514979 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 241.142857143 118.986275619 203% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.1428571429 23.4991977007 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.21951772744 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.97078651685 262% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 53.0 7.80617977528 679% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119338175697 0.243740707755 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578301882032 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336158058345 0.0758088955206 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0410350247133 0.150359130593 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335592477613 0.0667264976115 50% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.4 14.1392134831 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.36 48.8420337079 38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 12.1743820225 177% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.28 12.1639044944 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.01 8.38706741573 119% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.5 11.8971910112 181% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 11.2143820225 175% => OK
text_standard: 22.0 11.7820224719 187% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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