Educational institutions should actively encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers.
The issue of educational institution should encourage student to take the course that will prepare for lucrative careers is a controversial one. On the one hand, student’s tends to have interest in the other field and trying to have the guidence through there teacher would not be able to achieve it. One the other hand, taking courses that will prepare them for lucrative career would help them to have jobs with an ease. However, in the final analysis, I believe that field should be choosen acoording to the personal interest rather than the lucrative careers.
A main reason that (choosing field of interest would help the student to have active involvement into the class program.) For example, student having interest in an mathematics and its been forced him to attend the arts class then that student is totally wasting his time instead he could cultivated that amount time in his interested field. Additionally, student try to develope envy hatred towards the subject which they are been compulsated to attend.
Another reason for my view is that studying the lucrative field throughout the life and then regretting it during the job time would be late and crying over the fate that it won’t change ever. Specifically, if the person has interest in arts but due to wrong selection of the field in there course of time lends him to take a job of an engineering would lend him to mental pressure. The result is, wrong selection of the career may lead to mental pressure from which they will won’t be able to earn well for the family.
Some might argue, that though the field of subject are not of the interest but it may happen that they may have family business on it which would help there work to go in the flow. Yet, the scholar though won’t be ever happy with the work he did.
While there are arguments to be made for both sides, it is clear that there are greater advantages on to the subject of the interested field hence subject should be choosen wisely and not towards the lucrative.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...For example, student having interest in an mathematics and its been forced him to ...
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Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'cultivate'
Suggestion: cultivate
...tally wasting his time instead he could cultivated that amount time in his interested fiel...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, may, so, then, well, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 352.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76988636364 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46698074483 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480113636364 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 704.065955056 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8293235385 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.153846154 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0769230769 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286521120732 0.243740707755 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108544901557 0.0831039109588 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104180005966 0.0758088955206 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137976582854 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109338821171 0.0667264976115 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 100.480337079 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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