Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.
I completely agree that every individual in a society has a responsibilty to obey just laws and to disobey and resist unjust laws.Just laws are we should do not rash driving ,we should not drive in a state of drunk ,we should follow the principle of mahatma gandhi and follow the ethics and non voilence .
its our duty to obey the laws otherwise the consequences can make you feel regret for example if a cricketer does not follow the rules of the game,do match fixing and say slang to the opponent team then his image will be deprecated in front of large amount of audiences and his career will go down which would make him feel bad .another example is of any police person if he or she do not follow the rules laid down by the constitution of their country if they take bribe and got caught by the papraazi then it will be blot or stigma on his career and he will never feel exonerous.
Now comming to unjust rules these rules may be imposed on the people or a section of society people feel cheated from it like in India their is reservation which every general category person opposes who do not get benefit of it because it allows direct entry of schedule caste and schedule tribe even if they get less marks in the qualifying exam as they have a low cut off in this exam.Another unjust rule is groom side parents taking gifts n money from bride to get her married to their son which should be opposed as their is a law also made by the government to cure this disease like unjust rule.
So I conclude by saying that every individual in a society has a duty to respect just laws and disrespect the unjust laws
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 2235.4752809 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 303.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3597359736 5.05705443957 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31453455457 2.79657885939 83% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554455445545 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.2370786517 20% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 75.0 23.0359550562 326% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 200.2565542 60.3974514979 332% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 330.25 118.986275619 278% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 75.75 23.4991977007 322% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.21951772744 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 10.2758426966 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272139498669 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.215692439833 0.0831039109588 260% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158144664374 0.0758088955206 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215692439833 0.150359130593 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.158144664374 0.0667264976115 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.0 14.1392134831 262% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.27 48.8420337079 25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 12.1743820225 248% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.19 12.1639044944 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.38706741573 121% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.8971910112 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.0 11.2143820225 285% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.7820224719 238% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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