Governments should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
I agree that government should invest as much in the arts as they do in the military.
As our soldiers give their life and do battle with other rival troops
they are respected and should be helped by the government but art is also equal and artist are no longer an inferior personality or a supressed personality.
government should take art competition in different states to promote art and select out the young budding artists.government should put money in conserving our tombs,palaces and other monuments for example Lal bagh palace in indore which was the palace of King Yashwant Rao Holkar was in a bad state as it didn't have any support to the pillar now after 200 years in 2019 so the government save them by putting buttress with the pillars.
government should protect our monuments or historic places because it's walls are made by great artists of that time as the more the monument would be better,the increase in the tourism in their country which will increase the country's economy and the art will be promulgate by the tourists.
government should not over repair the defects in the sculptures made by picasso and other artists so that these aesthetics do not lose their real beauty.
government should promote the art researches done in our country even if it takes substantial amount of time because it will be worth.
I conclude by saying that art is equally important as military is.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 58.6224719101 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 2235.4752809 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 242.0 442.535393258 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01239669421 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70593960493 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 215.323595506 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578512396694 0.4932671777 117% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 704.065955056 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 121.214601397 60.3974514979 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 173.285714286 118.986275619 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5714285714 23.4991977007 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.97078651685 161% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419836346866 0.243740707755 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.247653605163 0.0831039109588 298% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.267985916924 0.0758088955206 354% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22380137796 0.150359130593 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.258486434334 0.0667264976115 387% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 14.1392134831 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 48.8420337079 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.37 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 100.480337079 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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