Men and women , because of their inherent physical differences, are not equally suited for many tasks.
Men and women are biologically different from each other. Both are different from each other, yet there are similarities from between them. Many person thinks that women inherent different physical attributes from men, and women are incapable or not equally suited of many works. I opposed this idea, and I am going to buttress my view by different points.
First of all, all humans are equally capable when it came to mental works. Despite of being women, many women prove themselves smarter than men. Some of them are astronaut, such as Kalpana Chawla . Some of them are doctors, scientists and gain reputation of being best in their profession. So, we can nullify women are incapable or not suitable in case of intelligence.
Many people argued that, in case of physical work women are not equally suited are they can not compete with men. If we begin with our mythological story , in our Hindu, we pray to our female god to protect us. So, from the ancient time women are equal to the men or even surpassed them in case of physical works. In modern works are many works that women are not permitted to do, not because they are not capable but in a premise that they can not compete with men. But that is such a dogma. In case of physical attributes every human being is different from each other. Even some women are stronger that men, but yet they are not allowed to that line of work.
Our society divided in such a way that in men's football or cricket math billions of people watching them, but in case of women sports there are barely any sponsored. There are many false idea that rule our society and we must bring them down to make our society equally available for every human being. It's not the capabilities it is our mentality that we must change to make an ideal society for everyone.
I end this discussion by, we must accept the biological difference between men and women. We must proud, not upset what we are. In the end we are all humans and that matters the most.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun person seems to be countable; consider using: 'Many people', 'Many persons'.
Suggestion: Many people; Many persons
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...em are astronaut, such as Kalpana Chawla . Some of them are doctors, scientists an...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... If we begin with our mythological story , in our Hindu, we pray to our female god...
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Line 7, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iety and we must bring them down to make our society equally available for every ...
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Line 7, column 305, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...qually available for every human being. Its not the capabilities it is our mentalit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, even so, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.5258426966 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 33.0505617978 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 358.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56983240223 5.05705443957 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31900361746 2.79657885939 83% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469273743017 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0136042038 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.3636363636 118.986275619 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302045992702 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903582738502 0.0831039109588 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106003989524 0.0758088955206 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157815151123 0.150359130593 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737147722576 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 14.1392134831 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 12.1639044944 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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