A nation should require all of it students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
I disagree with the suggestion that all students should be subjected to the same curriculum until college. A standard curriculum tries to create a monolithic society of which restricts students ability to be different and to think creatively. Students have different needs. Moreover, they have different cultural backgrounds. Its effect may be inconspicuous but has severe consequences on our society.
First, students are the next generation of our society. It would not be surprising for them to be different than the previous generation. With the current speed of technological progress, most of the mundane automatable work will be replaced by robots. However, the robots lack creativity of human beings. Standard curriculum however, kills creativity. Every student is different. Students have different skills and talents. They have different interests. This makes a standard curriculum ineffective, since it does not prepare the next generation with necessary emphasis on creativity.
Additionally, our world is culturally diverse. Students that come from different cultural backgrounds, may not feel that the current educational system welcomes their culture. For example, a hindu student might no want to attend biology class, or a muslim student might not want to attend a gym class. Moreover, minorities should be able to open their own schools and follow their own curriculums. This would hep them protect their identity, and would encourage them to remain as a part of a society that welcomes them.
Finally, stalwarts of the standard curriculum might argue that different curriculums would create cultural differences in our nation that might be difficult to fix. However, diversity is needed in the competitive work environment. It helps companies reach wider communities, and expand their market. In fact, this would help our nation by ameliorate the economy.
In conclusion, standard curriculum does not prepare our students for the world. Moreover, it does not take the differences students have into account. There should be more focus on individual needs, skills and talents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nts have different needs. Moreover, they have different cultural backgrounds. Its...
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Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
... be surprising for them to be different than the previous generation. With the curre...
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'so', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'in fact']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.230136986301 0.240241500013 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.156164383562 0.157235817809 99% => OK
Adjectives: 0.117808219178 0.0880659088768 134% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0465753424658 0.0497285424764 94% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0630136986301 0.0444667217837 142% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0849315068493 0.12292977631 69% => OK
Participles: 0.013698630137 0.0406280797675 34% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.97049126566 2.79330140395 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.027397260274 0.030933414821 89% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0739726027397 0.0997080785238 74% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.041095890411 0.0249443105267 165% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0109589041096 0.0148568991511 74% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2105.0 2732.02544248 77% => OK
No of words: 320.0 452.878318584 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.578125 6.0361032391 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.58838876751 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.434375 0.366273622748 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.353125 0.280924506359 126% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.3 0.200843997647 149% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1875 0.132149295362 142% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97049126566 2.79330140395 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 219.290929204 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528125 0.48968727796 108% => OK
Word variations: 54.9520789505 55.4138127331 99% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6194690265 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.3076923077 23.380412469 53% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8533797315 59.4972553346 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9615384615 141.124799967 57% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3076923077 23.380412469 53% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.423076923077 0.674092028746 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.21349557522 38% => OK
Readability: 47.6201923077 51.4728631049 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.23711340206 1.64882698954 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295433272576 0.391690518653 75% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.106761502819 0.123202303941 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.10054536542 0.077325440228 130% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.408528658044 0.547984918172 75% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.135868450096 0.149214159877 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856807603335 0.161403998019 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785090308687 0.0892212321368 88% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.239981135303 0.385218514788 62% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0777198922631 0.0692045440612 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182081285038 0.275328986314 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724352750044 0.0653680567796 111% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.4325221239 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.30420353982 113% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88274336283 164% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.70907079646 258% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.5995575221 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.