A nation should require all of its students to study the sale national curriculum until they enter college.
If two things happen at the same time, it does not automatically mean that there is a causality relationship. The author came the to the conclusion that since a change in the late night news format to include more national news and less local news and weather, they have seen lower advertising revenue, that the solution to this problem to is air more local news and weather. This argument is fundamentally flawed because the author jump to conclusions and fails to consider any other trends in viewership nationally or locally, the economy and trends in advertising spending and is creating a cause and effect relationship that is not guaranteed to be true.
The largest flaw in this argument is that the author is looking at the facts in a bubble and not taking a look at the larger system at play. There are several other reasons that advertising could be down during that period that cannot be analyzed unless one looks that the ratings of this station relative to other stations during this exact time period. We don't know that viewership went down at all during this period. There are other trends that could help shed some light on whether there is a clear relationship between the change an advertising spent. For Example with the introduction of more and more on demand streaming, viewer have the opportunity to catch up on prime time shows later in the evening during late night ours. This very common practice, that I myself am guilty of, could also be an explanation for less people watching actual late night programming.
Furthermore, this argument is weaker still because, it is very unclear if the complaints received during this time concerning weather and local news coverage was related to not enough coverage verse the quality of the coverage. The language used in that part of the argument is vague and it is absolutely likely that the station may have a quality of programing issue and not just a late night programming mix issue. It could be the case that in light of seeing the standards of national programming, the local news and weather is now not seen as quality relative to the national. This could be a possible source of the complaints about local news and weather.
Also with advertisers having to spread their dollars across more platforms and live streaming continues to grow, it is also possible that the reduction in advertising dollars is related to that as overall viewership is down on live TV across the board.
This argument could be bolstered if we had more data on who the station was performing relative to other stations during that period. This would show if that was a systemic deficit in live viewers of late night programing and all stations were down or if this station was performing in line with the trends. Examples of specific complains received during this time would also help give clarity and weight to the idea that the limited weather and local news was actually the issue. More analytics on the trends in advertising spend on live TV stations vs. advertising send on streaming TV content would also help one view this change relative to the overall market.
The connection of a change in programming make up and lower revenue in this argument was a leap. Critical pieces of information are missing in order for the facts to line up and be viewed relative to the system. The argument is flawed and would be helped by looking at clear viewership numbers during the time of the change.
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the sale national curriculum until they enter college. 16
- An ailing patient should have easy access to his or her doctor’s record of treating similarly afflicted patients. Through gaining such access, the ailing patient may better determine whether the doctor is competent to treat that medical condition. 54
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Line 3, column 824, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...aints about local news and weather. Also with advertisers having to spread their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, furthermore, if, look, may, so, still, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 36.0 19.5258426966 184% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.3162921348 186% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 88.0 58.6224719101 150% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2862.0 2235.4752809 128% => OK
No of words: 596.0 442.535393258 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80201342282 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.94096258147 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56919247356 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.409395973154 0.4932671777 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 887.4 704.065955056 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8875131386 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.090909091 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 23.4991977007 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.21951772744 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0318858364929 0.243740707755 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0110479293415 0.0831039109588 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0216553794681 0.0758088955206 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0189800937388 0.150359130593 13% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240579076326 0.0667264976115 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.8971910112 164% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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