A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
It is said, "education has the power to convert mirrors into windows". On this thought, I believe education plays a vital role in moulding a person's personality and providing a skeptic approach where one attains knowledge about various factors.
I completely believe that a nation should require its students to study the same national curriculum, reason being, many students are too ingeneous to understand their calling and hence, are unable to pick right career for themselves.
Exemplyfing my take further, in many South-Asian countries, where it is believed that opportunities in Science are more prestigious and monetarily yielding students opt for Science stream. They seek their future in this stream, yet innumerate students fail to perform even satisfactorily in school in the science stream. Due to bad results in their chosen field, they are unable to find admissions in good colleges. Many of them get admissions in private universities by giving huge donations only to prove of no worth later. When we look at this pattern of constant failure and its effects on students' mental health it becomes a matter of concern. Had these students would have opted for a neutral curriculum approach where they are taught subjects like arts, humanities, commerce along with science stream their story might had a different conclusion. Acknowledging such pattern, the government of India made changes in their curriculum recently.
Many critics would argue a student student should be exposed to various fields of study at an early stage in order to have precocious development at any early stage. This way a student can shape their future at an early stage and GenZ has become extremely aware and smart than their counters. They start working on themselves at a rudimentary stage. Therefore, it is justified to provide them with best possible education as demanded by them. This maybe true for some but can't be argued for all. When a legal drinking age in many countries is 25 or driving is atleast 16. How can we force them to select a stream of subjects which will impact their career for lifetime?
The students are like a wet mud, if a potter wants to get a best sculpture out of it, the potter needs to mould it slowly and sedulously. Therefore, a government should bring a mix of strategies and effectively divide the national curriculum to bring a dash of knowlege so that students can understand what to expect when they look out for applying in colleges.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 152, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...cation plays a vital role in moulding a persons personality and providing a skeptic app...
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Line 5, column 357, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to field'
Suggestion: to field
...eam. Due to bad results in their chosen field, they are unable to find admissions in ...
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Line 7, column 28, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: student
...recently. Many critics would argue a student student should be exposed to various fields of ...
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Line 7, column 394, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the best'.
Suggestion: with the best
...refore, it is justified to provide them with best possible education as demanded by them....
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Line 7, column 473, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...d by them. This maybe true for some but cant be argued for all. When a legal drinkin...
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Line 9, column 59, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ike a wet mud, if a potter wants to get a best sculpture out of it, the potter ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, may, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2076.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05109489051 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82021688729 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574209245742 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 638.1 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3819146234 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.263157895 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6315789474 23.4991977007 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.10526315789 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163258197834 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464677101499 0.0831039109588 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562313385722 0.0758088955206 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103944646956 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0806049241105 0.0667264976115 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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