A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The choice of subjects in High school has been a topic of debate since ages. The prompt recommends that all the students in the country should study the same national curriculum until they enter college. In my opinion, I mostly agree with this recommendation and feel that the students should more or less study the same national curriculum along with scope for optional subjects, for the following three reasons.
To begin, when students enters junior school, they are at a very nascent stage in their development process and don’t necessarily have the ability to decide what path or course will be best for them. So, some subjects need to be taught to all students in school, so that they gain a perspective on the matter that they are going to learn for the next decade or so in their life. For example, in some American states, it is mandatory to take classes in mathematics, social science and english for all students in the state. This has resulted in enhancing the quality of education in those states as compared to their counterparts who have taken a more liberal approach right from the beginning.
Furthermore, it is necessary to build the basics of some specific subjects in school so as improve the overall learning experience in higher studies. Consider the case of mathematics and english. These are the fundamental subjects that need to be taught to all children right from junior school until they graduate as it helps them to grasp any other subject with ease and are very useful in life in general too.
Moreover, there is a certainly a need for some uniformity across the country, so that it is guaranteed that, by the time these students enter college, they have acquired at least basic knowledge in the fundamental subjects as mentioned above. On the other hand, in my opinion, there should also be some subjects that are kept optional so that curious students can explore different areas of study and challenge themselves with something other than the regular curriculum.
In conclusion, I believe that having a uniform national curriculum would turn out to be beneficial for country. But, the curriculum should not be rigid and should allow some optional subjects in order to ameliorate the overall development of the students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, at least, for example, in conclusion, in general, in my opinion, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 381.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92913385827 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63421101203 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514435695538 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 704.065955056 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7586361939 60.3974514979 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.142857143 118.986275619 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2142857143 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 5.21951772744 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198999434652 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789617628573 0.0831039109588 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083513152661 0.0758088955206 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126025743719 0.150359130593 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827816973278 0.0667264976115 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 14.1392134831 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.75 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.