A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The speaker states that all the students of a country should follow the same standardized national curriculum until they enter college. I think students should be taught all the subjects until they become of age when they can decide a field for which they are passionate and like to pursue further education in that field. To provide equal opportunity to all the students same curruculam is necessary. However certain traditional and cultural things can always vary depending upon the region.
Many diverse cultures can exist within a country and for students to know learn about all these is not possible. Consider the country India which has 29 states and all these have their unique culture, language and traditions. It is imperative for children in a particular region to learn about the culture of that area. For example, people from the state of Punjab would prefer to read, write and speak in Punjabi. Therefore it makes sense that curriculum of students in Punjab includes learning Punjabi. It is however not possible for them to learn regional languages of all the 28 states.
In constrast subjects such as nation's history, mathematics and science which are not specific to the culture should have the same syllabus for all students. If some are taught different things than the others then it would be difficult to evaluate them on the basis of a common measure. As most colleges prefer to test students before accepting their applications and most preferrable means for that is to conduct a test, for fair results and judgement they expect that students with the same educational background and knowledge appear for the test. Therefore in this case having same curriculum makes sense.
Moreover having the same curriculum nation wide makes it easier to maintain the content being taught. For example consider that for science the same textbook is used throughout the country. If some amends need to be made in the book for example adding or removing a particular chapter, it would be much easier to make the change and propogate it all over the nation. Hence in this case too having the same curriculum makes sense. This however cannot be extended till college as by that time students must focus on studying subjects in which they want to make a career.
In conclusion having the same curriculum nation wide is beneficial in the aspects discusseed above as compared to having it different for various regions within a country. But some regional content can definitely vary for a count
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2105.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 418.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03588516746 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53891328639 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 215.323595506 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.49043062201 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.3802406157 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.238095238 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9047619048 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7619047619 5.21951772744 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313501666763 0.243740707755 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101455639703 0.0831039109588 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120573679823 0.0758088955206 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191521881171 0.150359130593 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120049598822 0.0667264976115 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.1392134831 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 100.480337079 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.