A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The recommendation to change to a single curriculum in all of the schools is at one hand ambitious and jingoistic, but on the other brings about certain drawbacks that has been avoided by a diverse curriculum in the past.
The first challenge faced by any curriculum is what are the necessary subjects that are needed to be taught in order to get full understanding of that field. In a same curriculum, all the field will be needed to cover in the entire curriculum. This would make it diverse, but would inadvertently create a hodgepodge of all the subjects together. That is why in the first place, the entire curriculum was divided.
Even though a curriculum this diverse is created by some intellects, it needs to be conveyed by someone i.e. a teacher. In a unified curriculum nationwide, most of the teachers will either have to adapt to the new subjects which are added to an already mind boggling curriculum, or they have to change their entire line of study in order to teach students more effectively. This would ineffectively alienate the teachers from their line of teaching, and possibly bury their entire motivation.
But most of the casualties will be of those students for which this entire curriculum was meant to be. Students before college usually choose their field of study in senior secondary school (or high school in many other countries) in order to choose their career. But a common curriculum would in fact force them to learn about all the different subjects and line of study which they were not interested in. And the curriculum requires them to learn all of those things in order to make their knowledge even more diverse. This would eventually create a deadlock in between the student and the curriculum.
So, in the end, I would venerate the idea of creating same national curriculum before the college, but the choice to choose the field of study by a student was introduced in school in order to develop a student's mindset for the college. In order to diversify the curriculum, certain measures like mandatory subjects can be kept amongst all the field which can bridge the gap between different line of study, rather than changing the entire curriculum, if not needed at all.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ion to change to a single curriculum in all of the schools is at one hand ambitious and ji...
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Line 17, column 204, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...roduced in school in order to develop a students mindset for the college. In order to di...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, in fact, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 379.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88126649077 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7163328894 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448548812665 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 583.2 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.1819463516 60.3974514979 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.333333333 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2666666667 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.21951772744 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246611883684 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919177443304 0.0831039109588 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670966757531 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1457009955 0.150359130593 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627046318785 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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