A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college as colleges conduct same examinations for all students irrespective of their educational background.
This uniform curriculum can give equal opportunity to all the students when they appear for competitive exams as every student would then have a similar reach to resources to gain knowledge.
This various curriculums in schools also creates differences between students when they enter college. So these kind of disturbances can be avoided with the introduction of uniform curriculum across schools in the nation.
It is also challenging to monitor the content being taught in various curriculums, some may hold enough content to prepare students for life after school and some may not, this gives an unfair advantage to the students enrolled in the curriculum that teaches quality content over the others. This can also be prevented by the uniform curriculum.
There are some schools who follow their own curriculum and are unaffordable for common people, this may cause acrimonious differences between rich and poor students. This can also be curbed with the proposed method. This way, every student will be equal before education.
Therefore, I agree with the recommendation given, but the final curriculum must be constructed meticulously.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
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Message: Did you mean 'monitoring'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: monitoring
...n the nation. It is also challenging to monitor the content being taught in various cur...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, therefore, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 2235.4752809 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 210.0 442.535393258 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50476190476 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.55969084622 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91557705595 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 215.323595506 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604761904762 0.4932671777 123% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 704.065955056 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.8716234631 60.3974514979 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.6 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 23.4991977007 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 5.21951772744 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344239131284 0.243740707755 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133383840147 0.0831039109588 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180912448966 0.0758088955206 239% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194030517767 0.150359130593 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.212986445058 0.0667264976115 319% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.1639044944 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 100.480337079 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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