A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Students who are applying to colleges after their high school should be at the same comparative base of the academic level. This will help all the colleges to correctly navigate all the applied profiles. All the students will have same minimum qualification and whoever wants to perform more and learn more can be given a chance to take advanced subjects which can be a plus point to the student. This would avdvantageous to the students to excel and that would impact the nation as students are the future of the country
Let's say for example, a student who studies in one state say Ohio has different curriculum than another student studying in Los Angeles. Both of these students apply to one college like, CMU. Now, CMU is going through the applicants would be confused by looking at all these different curriculums of different schools and these two students who are quite competitive will not get a fair fight to that prestigious school. CMU will look into the each of the candidates profile and compare the curriculum first and if the Ohio state student does not have a good subject background which the school's fault, the student will not a chance to go to CMU just because his or her school did not have a better curriculum than others. Hence, this is not a fair fight among the students who are equally passionate, interested and qualified to go to a particular school, but one will lose just because their school's curriculum did not cover as many topics as other schools. But there are some setbacks for this plan as well. Students who want to study more than a required curriculum or more passionated by some other subjects wouldn't be ablr to do that because of this national curriculum. This can be solved by introducing some electives that students can take other than their main curriculum to follow their interests.
So, by providing one national curriculum to all the students in the nations would help them get a fair chance of getting into a university which will help the nation for the better future. Therefore I agree with the recommendation provided.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, look, so, therefore, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.4196629213 129% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1723.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 359.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79944289694 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60237206717 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 215.323595506 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476323119777 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 704.065955056 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.7562403749 60.3974514979 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.538461538 118.986275619 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6153846154 23.4991977007 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257506531288 0.243740707755 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967540892611 0.0831039109588 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768165495055 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200931448038 0.150359130593 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176605663012 0.0667264976115 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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