A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The development of country depends upon the current youth where many of them are students. With the rapid development of technology, students used to collaborate with each other to find creative solutions for the tough problems in the society. For this, students require good communication skills as well as grip in the area they are dealing with.
Every nation will be having their own curriculum which includes native languages and some of the curriculum as per their native traditions. For example, in India, Hindi is secondary language for all the South Indian students where as native language will be their primary language. Here, we can see that students were tought only about their national languages and native languages but not globally used languages like English. This will surely create a problem to the student when he or she wants to communicate with foreign people. In the same way, technology as an example, every nation need to adopt the current technological aspects and not the out dated ones.
Therefore, I strongly say that students of nation not needed to follow same national curriculum until they enter college and they should adopt current requirements when required to have a long survival. This will surely make students to concentrate on their area of interest and finally strives for development of nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...lum which includes native languages and some of the curriculum as per their native traditio...
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Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...guage for all the South Indian students where as native language will be their primary l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, second, so, therefore, well, for example, as well as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 58.6224719101 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 2235.4752809 50% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 218.0 442.535393258 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16513761468 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.55969084622 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64436710463 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 215.323595506 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600917431193 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 355.5 704.065955056 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2099321416 60.3974514979 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 112.6 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 5.21951772744 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298192250957 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114448210061 0.0831039109588 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130038593682 0.0758088955206 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223965819571 0.150359130593 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.159133736273 0.0667264976115 238% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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