A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
A standardized curriculum can be advantageous in many ways, especially in the context of a student who is about to enter college. At most colleges, students come from many different backgrounds and with academic experiences that do not resemble that of any other student. With the amalgamation of such a wide range of experiences, it is important to be able to establish a baseline of knowledge that college professors can build upon and that's where a standardized national school curriculum can come into play.
Imagine a scenario: two students who are about to start their freshman year at college. They are from 2 different states, but both went to public school in their town and both took Calculus in high school. Their first semester they are both in the same Calculus II because it is a pre-requisite for their other classes. One of them finds the material to be something that she's already encountered before and so finds the class fairly easy, maybe even too slow-paced for her liking. The other one finds the class to be too fast-paced and likely the most difficult class she's ever taken. Why were the students' experiences in the same class so different? After all, they had both successfully finished Calculus in high school and had about the same intellectual prowess. This is a scenario that is not a singular case in any college class. The educational background that everyone has when they enter college has no standardization. This makes college classes a particularly difficult situation to navigate because professors have no established baseline that they can assume all students in their class are at. As a result, classes end up being too difficult for some and not challenging enough for others.
A nation-wide standardized curriculum can also ensure that all students get exposure to a wide range of subjects. There are countries where the education system mandates that every student has to study the same set of 9 subjects until high school. This allows students the opportunity to explore their interests and eventually settle on what they would like to pursue further. A standardized curriculum might restrict students' flexibility in their choice of subjects and not allow them to focus exclusively on what they enjoy studying, but this is not always the case. Often students don't know where their interests lie until they are given the opportunity to get a feel for what the subject is, and that is exactly where a standard curriculum can help the students get the required exposure.
A standardized curriculum before college can give students the exposure that they need to various subjects before they choose a specific field of study in college. It can also help to establish a standardized level of understanding and knowledge among students coming from different schools across the nation. Calculus I in school A could then be assumed to have covered the same material as Calculus I at school B, making students' transitions into college easier. Standardization of a currciulum can be the key to ensuring students are as prepared as they can be to enter college.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, then, after all, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 19.5258426966 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 33.0505617978 127% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2591.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 515.0 442.535393258 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03106796117 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88753337576 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 215.323595506 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452427184466 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 820.8 704.065955056 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6157391685 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.652173913 118.986275619 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3913043478 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86956521739 5.21951772744 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283429790943 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868313834303 0.0831039109588 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568611466414 0.0758088955206 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188263508002 0.150359130593 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057193078186 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 14.1392134831 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 100.480337079 95% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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