A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
''Knowledge is kindling of a flame,not the filling of a vessel'' says Socrates.Today,knowlede is present everywhere for everyone.Only thing which matters is,the way one seeks for it and achieves the most out of it.Considering the universal availability for all,the dearth of common grounds for knowledge ,evenhanded for all the people of nation has led to serious of problems.
First of all,paucity of common grounds would lead to discrimination.The difference between te currriculum of CBSE and Stateboard syllabus of India proves as a good example for this.CBSE which involves conceptual study and advanced thinking are implemented in some schools while Stateboard syllabus which tests the remembring capacity of a student are implemented in some schools.On a longer go,the society which demands creative thinking,gives an upper hand for the students who practised in CBSE curriculum.Satya nadella,CEO of microsoft is a good apothosis for this.He claims his rigorous school curriculum which involved advanced thinking,as the sole reason for his achievement in his career.
Secondly,affordability to the different curriculums would create a huge mess.Educational standards charge the users according to the potential of the curriculum.In such a case,advanced curriculum would levy a prohibitive sum of money,which may be difficult to be afforded for the destitute population of the country.
Albert einstein,the science prodigy of physics claims that,his family was so destitute that, they couldn't afford to pay his school fees even upto his 5th standard curriculum.The churches during their time, levied the fees in large amount,which made education unaccessible to everyone, claims Einstein.There by ,a nation should analyse the average capability of affording by considering the entire population,and must fix a common ground.
In contrary,fixing a common ground would not always work.This is because ''No two students are same''.One may be so exemplar in learning and might need a cerebral understanding of the subject,while one may find it difficult to cope up with the heavy load of curriculum.Decresing the curriculum level and setting it evenly across,would prove to be a harmful one for the prodigies out there.Mark zuckerberg is an archetype for this.He was so good in his academics which made him feel that,the academics were so simple.This made him to learn excess topics like coding with the help of his father.Reducing the curriculums for prodigies like Mark,would make us loose many booming scientists for the future world.
Over all,a book cannot be judged by its cover.Though few of the people seek for an advanced curriculum,the nation cannot leave behing the majority population who still doesn't have even a mere exposure to knowledge.There by the nation should take an equlibrium decisison helping both the categories of people.
Conclusively,one innoucuous way which would help both the categories of people, is to lay own a common curriculum in school and provide a huge exposure to be chosen in college.Doing so would boost the thirst for education among the major insolvent population of the country and would avoid discrimination among all.Also poviding a huge variety of courses in college,would ensure providing the choice of selection of courses which might suit one's passion.Thereby, common curriclum could also be set,basic knowledge could also be made accessible for everyone,pathway for those who thrive for advanced knowledge could also be laid.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, while, of course, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 24.0 12.4196629213 193% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 58.6224719101 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2960.0 2235.4752809 132% => OK
No of words: 530.0 442.535393258 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58490566038 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79809637944 4.55969084622 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.55911477348 2.79657885939 127% => OK
Unique words: 293.0 215.323595506 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552830188679 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 924.3 704.065955056 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 75.0 23.0359550562 326% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.429695301 60.3974514979 271% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 422.857142857 118.986275619 355% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 75.7142857143 23.4991977007 322% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.5714285714 5.21951772744 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 63.0 7.80617977528 807% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149590744621 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815446394982 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409844607815 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815446394982 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409844607815 0.0667264976115 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.7 14.1392134831 302% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -13.11 48.8420337079 -27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.92365168539 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.7 12.1743820225 277% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.27 12.1639044944 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.91 8.38706741573 142% => OK
difficult_words: 153.0 100.480337079 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.8971910112 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.0 11.2143820225 285% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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