a nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Yes, i am agree with the statement that a nation should require all of its students to study the same naitonal curriculum until they enter college. Because the world we are living in is growing or changing very fast due to the technological advancement. Gradually, our world is becoming more and more global due to the social media, which is basically one of the biggest accomplishmet of technology. Technology has changed the way of living. Things are quite easy now ,as compare to the last 20 years. So, in my prespective, the curriculum should be more technically backed or there should be some technical subjects needs to be discuss or teach to our upcoming young generation. Because now, there is nothing can be run/accomplish without some foundation knowledge of technology. From, last 15-20 years the problems has been changed. Now, its now more global than limited to a specific country or condition.
And, the most recent and the most dangeroud problem we are facing right now is the climate change. Which has been down alot of damage to alot of countries in a recent time. There is a lost of so many lives, money and wild life etc.
So, the problems are like these should be countered in our near future. So, the basic knowledge of the climate change is necessary to understand by all of the human beings living on this planet, it should not to limited to only people who are getting paid for this.
In recent, there is a men named Mr Rajeev known as the waterman of india, responsible for the ressurection of the 1100 villages of india. And he is an Ayurvedic doctor. This things tells alot about the how education can help you to gain what you wan to achieve in your life. He is an pure example of this.
So, thats why we should add these technical useful parts as a subject in our curriculum. So, everybody can understand the importance and the useful use of technology. So, they contribute in to the society in a more productive way. Or to the future of our upcoming generation and our earth
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 357.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65266106443 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65003463812 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551820728291 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3411129486 60.3974514979 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.5 118.986275619 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2272727273 23.4991977007 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 5.21951772744 10% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 7.80617977528 205% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186868068324 0.243740707755 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470035417779 0.0831039109588 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145208742774 0.0758088955206 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0734654172605 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909875546452 0.0667264976115 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 14.1392134831 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 48.8420337079 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 12.1743820225 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.1639044944 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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