A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: However
...lar nationwide until they reach college.However I strongly disagree with argument becau...
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Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
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Suggestion: However,
...lar nationwide until they reach college.However I strongly disagree with argument becau...
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Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lum nationwide will takeaway the freedom from students of choosing subjects which...
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Line 2, column 75, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: If
... particularly in the field of education.If the student cant decide what he wants t...
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Line 2, column 90, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...n the field of education.If the student cant decide what he wants to learn in future...
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Line 2, column 125, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...dent cant decide what he wants to learn in future , He can loose interest which can resul...
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Line 2, column 134, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
... decide what he wants to learn in future , He can loose interest which can result ...
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Line 2, column 144, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...at he wants to learn in future , He can loose interest which can result into students...
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Line 2, column 209, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...result into students leaving the schools , The school drop out rates would increas...
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Line 2, column 270, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
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Suggestion: this situation; these situations
...t rates would increase significantly in these situation. Also if they don't leave schools ...
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Line 2, column 287, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...rease significantly in these situation. Also if they don't leave schools they m...
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Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... is if the curriculum is same throughout the nation , providing knowledge about ...
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Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...urriculum is same throughout the nation , providing knowledge about regional lan...
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Suggestion:
...riculum is same throughout the nation , providing knowledge about regional langu...
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Line 3, column 126, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: , culture
...iding knowledge about regional languages,culture and history might not be as efficiently...
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Line 4, column 36, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...nt. In conclusion I would say that the authors idea of same curriculum nationwide is i...
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Line 4, column 108, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
...nationwide is inaccurate as it does not takes into consideration the primary interest...
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Line 4, column 174, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this idea' or 'these ideas'?
Suggestion: this idea; these ideas
...he primary interest of the students and these idea might also keep the students isolated f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 58.6224719101 39% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 2235.4752809 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 195.0 442.535393258 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50769230769 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.55969084622 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94634535032 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 215.323595506 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625641025641 0.4932671777 127% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 704.065955056 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.2657977816 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 214.8 118.986275619 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.0 23.4991977007 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.21951772744 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244005912918 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117948894937 0.0831039109588 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065661677032 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135113618172 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609519573716 0.0667264976115 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 14.1392134831 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 48.8420337079 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 12.1743820225 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.27 12.1639044944 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 11.7820224719 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.

Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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