A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
The author here states that the curriculum for students should be similar nationwide until they reach college.However I strongly disagree with argument because imposing a same curriculum nationwide will takeaway the freedom from students of choosing subjects which they are majorly intersted in.
Freedom of choice is very necessary particularly in the field of education.If the student cant decide what he wants to learn in future , He can loose interest which can result into students leaving the schools , The school drop out rates would increase significantly in these situation. Also if they don’t leave schools they might study the syllabus vapidly and pass the exams cramming things without any practical knowledge.
The other important thing is if the curriculum is same throughout the nation , providing knowledge about regional languages,culture and history might not be as efficiently possible and the students might not get to know certain things about there regions which is very important.
In conclusion I would say that the authors idea of same curriculum nationwide is inaccurate as it does not takes into consideration the primary interest of the students and these idea might also keep the students isolated from acquiring regional knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 33.0505617978 39% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 58.6224719101 39% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1074.0 2235.4752809 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 195.0 442.535393258 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50769230769 5.05705443957 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.55969084622 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94634535032 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 215.323595506 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625641025641 0.4932671777 127% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 704.065955056 47% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.2657977816 60.3974514979 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 214.8 118.986275619 181% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.0 23.4991977007 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.21951772744 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244005912918 0.243740707755 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117948894937 0.0831039109588 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065661677032 0.0758088955206 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135113618172 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609519573716 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.0 14.1392134831 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 48.8420337079 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 12.1743820225 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.27 12.1639044944 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.38706741573 117% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 100.480337079 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.8971910112 160% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 11.7820224719 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.