A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
With the increasing popularity and advantages of technology, the use of technology has increased a lot since past few decades.The prompt believes that though mass media and internet has curtailed people's attention span, they have made people capable to sort through sea of information and find the pertinent one.I agree with the author that technology and mass media has increased filtration capacity and the effect of technology is positive but I don't agree that technology has reduced our attention span.
First of all,there is an immense amount of information out there because of the increasing adaption for internet and mass media.people are becoming more aware of the advantages it offers and use them quite heavily since past few decades.To get the relevant information through legion information is quite cumbersome if one does not aware of how to filter the germane ones within these information.As they say "necessity is the key of invention", it is needed for people to be able to gauge relevant information through these mediums to take advantage of it.For instance,
Secondly,This vast amount of information is not blindly reliable since anyone can add those information according to their knowledge.
For instance,In Wikipedia, one of the most popular website to get information, pages can be added and edited by anyone without any check or restrain. Thus all the information there on pages cannot be trusted entirely since it is subjective. if one does not have the eye to ponder on reliable and relevant information,they won't be able to take advantage of mediums like mass media and internet
On the other side,The attention span has been increased and not shorten since there are number of distractions to be overcome for a person to take benefits of internet and it requires high attention and discerning ability.
So I don't agree that enhanced capacity for discerning correct information has compensated for reduced attention span.attention span has not been decreased
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 16
- Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developi 16
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...age of it.For instance, Secondly,This vast amount of information is not blind...
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...y anyone without any check or restrain. Thus all the information there on pages cann...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1714.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 318.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38993710692 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08183962164 2.79657885939 110% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 215.323595506 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509433962264 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 23.0359550562 230% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 226.948905165 60.3974514979 376% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 285.666666667 118.986275619 240% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.0 23.4991977007 226% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 5.21951772744 224% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 7.80617977528 231% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0376222205012 0.243740707755 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0210192912418 0.0831039109588 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0172190624547 0.0758088955206 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0187210022061 0.150359130593 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153082951968 0.0667264976115 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.5 14.1392134831 216% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 9.22 48.8420337079 19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.92365168539 201% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 12.1743820225 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.87 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.38706741573 119% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 100.480337079 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.8971910112 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 11.2143820225 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.7820224719 263% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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