In a nation there should be a common curriculum upto college.
Any nation in the world is a congregation of a people who are united by a similar thought/ideology which brings them on a common platform to form it as one entity.This idea forms the very basic nation states.This coming together of similar ideology-type of people (Which at the same time can be of a diverse ethnicity too e.g. Nations like the U.S.A.., India and the erstwhile U.S.S.R.and the list goes on) makes what we call a nation in the modern sense of the world we live in, hence it is- but natural that in any such setting we should go for a single unified common curriculum which corresponds to the generally held beliefs of the country.
Why would i think like that?, well for a moment if we disagree with this proposition of mine, can we imagine living in a country where curriculum for a basic but a very foundational subjects like History/Geography/Civic sensibilities in not same throughout its geography how would the populace of such a country reconcile to such a difference in the subjects which are so foundational to their state of being. Can we imagine living in a country where people from one state have a completely anachronistic view of History in comparison to the people wouldn't such a population be in constant clash to put one view over the other and thereby putting forth a constant clash between differnt groups of people in the same country thereby endangering the very concept of a nation-state itself. Same idea would apply for other subjects in the curriculum too for example we have different or clashing views propagated through a different curriculum over topics such as Geography in students of a country such Idea could lead to different representations of a country's Geography itself in the young and impressionable minds of its young population which could lead to conflicting views about a country land boundaries and its other Geography within a country's population as the young population grows up into mature voting citizenry.
This goes even beyond the like in subjects like Science if we imagine different curriculums wherein in one of the curriculums we put courses to a different levels of difficulty this would put the students at an additional pressure of reconciling the differences when they reach the college stages and put an additional burden on them..
So to sum it up I think that a uniform curriculum is the best way forward for any nation.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'e.g.', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'i think', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.240476190476 0.240241500013 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.119047619048 0.157235817809 76% => OK
Adjectives: 0.114285714286 0.0880659088768 130% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0357142857143 0.0497285424764 72% => OK
Pronouns: 0.05 0.0444667217837 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.161904761905 0.12292977631 132% => OK
Participles: 0.0285714285714 0.0406280797675 70% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.07970644618 2.79330140395 110% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0238095238095 0.030933414821 77% => OK
Particles: 0.0047619047619 0.0016655270985 286% => OK
Determiners: 0.140476190476 0.0997080785238 141% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0238095238095 0.0249443105267 95% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0261904761905 0.0148568991511 176% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2406.0 2732.02544248 88% => OK
No of words: 409.0 452.878318584 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.8826405868 6.0361032391 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.58838876751 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.339853300733 0.366273622748 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.261613691932 0.280924506359 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.178484107579 0.200843997647 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132029339853 0.132149295362 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07970644618 2.79330140395 110% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 219.290929204 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469437652812 0.48968727796 96% => OK
Word variations: 50.7706059115 55.4138127331 92% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6194690265 34% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 58.4285714286 23.380412469 250% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 123.451221467 59.4972553346 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 343.714285714 141.124799967 244% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.4285714286 23.380412469 250% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.42857142857 0.674092028746 212% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.21349557522 192% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 84.5899406217 51.4728631049 164% => OK
Elegance: 2.10465116279 1.64882698954 128% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151703419726 0.391690518653 39% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.205414223301 0.123202303941 167% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0781134398014 0.077325440228 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.822893598065 0.547984918172 150% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.116764965074 0.149214159877 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0914573179545 0.161403998019 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249595438477 0.0892212321368 28% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.309155424738 0.385218514788 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.167584961777 0.0692045440612 242% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101905920251 0.275328986314 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354454665887 0.0653680567796 54% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 13.5995575221 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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