Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
Imagine a morning without the chirping of the sparrows ,only the rumbling of the machines and the horns of the automobiles ,without the beautiful variegated flowers, with only one coloured flowers how boring the life would be .This kind of imagination itself is dull and colourless the reality then would be so monotonous. Diversity in ecosystem is the one which keeps everything so vivacious .this makes each and every part of the ecosystem be it plants ,be it wild animal rather any animal imperious. as we all know that the nature always try to remain in its equilibrium .if humans try to dominate it will be harmful for the nature as well as for the human itself hence I believe that any remaining wilderness areas should be preserved in their natural state .
Humans have made enormous progress in every field .as every part of the nature plays its role and it is important it needs to be preserved .let us take an example of the food chain .if any one who is part of the food chain try to dominate over the other ultimately it Is harmful for that dominating part same is true for humans. There are different roles for everybody in the nature some animals pollinate some plants if that animals were not there that will lead to that plant to become an endangered species. Hence everything should be preserved in its natural state. For the immediate profit from economic gain one should not neglect the long term harmful effects
Laws are effective way to implement an idea .Only awareness about preserving nature will not be effective and it is from the past experience that it has not taken seriously until some big harm has not been created .Hence in order to avoid some deleterious indication from nature itself Nation should pass the law foe preserving wilderness . Any further negligence will lead the human race to be extinct as that once powerful dianosaure
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, then, well, as for, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 325.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75692307692 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48998029518 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541538461538 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 40.0 23.0359550562 174% => OK
Sentence length SD: 123.101330212 60.3974514979 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 193.25 118.986275619 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.625 23.4991977007 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 30.0 7.80617977528 384% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321846384363 0.243740707755 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138723117535 0.0831039109588 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110715781441 0.0758088955206 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210111270884 0.150359130593 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272372000556 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 14.1392134831 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.88 48.8420337079 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 12.1743820225 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.22 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 11.2143820225 161% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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