Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.
Development and industrialization has been the matter of concern in the presence world. In the statement above, the author has raise the similar issue regarding the concern on preservation of wilderness areas by the nation despite the importance such area for the economic benefits. As a student of environment science, I strongly support the above issue. The conservation and preservation of natural environment has very important role in the presence world as the natural resources has been constantly decreasing with the increase of development. Wilderness itself plays an important role in the point of economic gain. The contents of the following paragraph includes the detail reasoning regarding the priority to the wilderness area rather than economic gain.
First of all, Preservation of wilderness has vital contribution for the maintenance of eco system, very important system through which the species in the world exist, as well create the aesthetic beauty in the area itself. Every nations should give priority to preserve the natural state because natural state provides the fresh air as well as it plays role in shrinking of the Greenhouse gases which has been the increasing in the presence world because of globalization. As an example, among the countries in the presence world, China has created a worldwide business and at the same time it produces harmful greenhouse gases. The Chinese people might have lacks fresh air to breath as there is lack of natural state in their country.
Furthermore, Natural state itself plays an important role in the economic benefit so it is wise decision for a nation to pass law for the preservation of wilderness area rather than destroying it for economic benefit. The world has been such a globalized that the people at presence world are desperate to have a peace and love aesthetic beauty of the natural state. Here, in such cases remaining the wilderness area in their natural state might play important role in the attraction of the nature lovers. To illustrate further, let us know about a small country Nepal. Nepal has been one of developing country. Closely seeing its economic source, tourism is one of the main source of income of the country. This is because the country has preserve natural state like chitwan national park, bardia national park, sagaramatha national park and many more more and wildlife reserves. These are the central of attration to the natural lovers.
Additionally, preference of economic gain without preservation of the wilderness area in their natural state does not sounds a smart decision. Destroying the natural state for economic benefits might result in natural disasters like flood if the area is plain or might create landslide if the area if high hill. Example, as we can see in the news that thousands of victims die due to the natural disasters, such incidents are from the area where deforestation were done for the road and hotels.
In conclusion, although economic gain are important for any nations. The priority should be given to preserve the wilderness area in the natural state as it is necessary to the presence world. Keeping the important roles and contribution of natural state of wilderness areas in the presence world and mother earth, I would proudly support the above statement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 12.9106741573 232% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2776.0 2235.4752809 124% => OK
No of words: 538.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15985130112 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81610080973 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80115656028 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436802973978 0.4932671777 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 881.1 704.065955056 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9611069795 60.3974514979 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 23.4991977007 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.70833333333 5.21951772744 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 10.2758426966 195% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352125845883 0.243740707755 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110162953867 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813895022902 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23103879307 0.150359130593 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424964541113 0.0667264976115 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.8420337079 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 100.480337079 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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