People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
In the light of the above mentioned issue which corresponds to the discussion that people who rely on their emotion while making decisions and justify those decisions with logic later on are considered to be poor decision makers it can be said that depending upon the gravity of the situation decision must be taken.
The above claim of dependency of the decision on the gravity of the situation can be better exemplified with numerous illustrations.For example the decisions like whether to hire an efficient or fire an inefficient employee that decisions are usually made by the Human Resource Manager of a company.Now for the betterment of the company the manager has to be impartial and also should have control over his emotions as they might alter his decisions.Now emotion based decision may be proved to be detrimental for the company afterwards.Thus emotionally biased decisions and justifying those with logic afterwards are considered solicitous for a company.
Now in support of the above claim it can also be delineated with a position of a judge in a Court Room who usually has to make decisions in different sensitive matters. The judge must be unbiased and should not be controlled by his emotions while giving punishment to a criminal which can vary from lifetime imprisonment to sentence to death in its extreme cases.If it is done in other way then people may loose their confidence on the legal proceedings which will be detrimental for a society.
Now the above issue an also be viewed from other side as emotionless decision sometime leads to decision lacking humanity. This can be portrayed as during the judgement the judge has to listen to the criminal also as whether he has something to say in his favour and also should considered the evidences meticulously as by using economical power sometimes the evidence can be altered also.This may sometime subjected to the punishment of the poor people which will decline the humanity as legal rules and proceedings are always based on the principle that a criminal can be chastise if treate
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, thus, while, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.4196629213 145% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 14.8657303371 47% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 2235.4752809 78% => OK
No of words: 344.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03779069767 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91294590637 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 215.323595506 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479651162791 0.4932671777 97% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 23.0359550562 247% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 179.08998359 60.3974514979 297% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 288.833333333 118.986275619 243% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.3333333333 23.4991977007 244% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 5.21951772744 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 10.2758426966 19% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346877958777 0.243740707755 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203872645126 0.0831039109588 245% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1527135284 0.0758088955206 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255498237263 0.150359130593 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147306095006 0.0667264976115 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.0 14.1392134831 219% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.16 48.8420337079 11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.7 12.1743820225 219% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.84 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.38706741573 122% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.8971910112 240% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 11.2143820225 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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