People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterward are poor decision-makers.
The human emotion has been found over the years to be subjective and not objective - making people give different reasons, choices and decisions for their actions. This has also been proven by scientific evaluations to be true, hence it is not used as a basis of any sort in systems such as the judiciary, to judge cases. As a result judges do not judge cases for the emotional-merit of such cases, but based on evidences. Arguments in the law court also do not hold water if they are emotionally-based.
In view of this, decision-making based on emotions can be really fatal and this can be compounded by logical justifications made afterward. Take for instance, I come into the office and find my table messed up. I could choose to flare up emotionally and ask vehemently about the mess. Doing this would make me jump to conclusions and make mistakes, as I do not know the cause for such mess. However, and better still, I could choose to be calm and inquire about the mess. You will agree with me that doing the latter would be better, as the cause for the mess might be as a result of some repairs being conducted in the roof of the building or due to natural causes such as an earthquake, or an earth tremor.
In addition to this, making a decision based on emotion and justifying such with logic afterwards would only make one come across as immature. This is because the ability to critically analyse situations has been found to be commensurate with maturity. Thus, one who is mature is expected to analyze situations with logic and seek explanations that are fact-based and realistic, and not emotional-based and imaginary. This point is buttressed in politics, as the knowledgeable and politically-mature persons who can transform the minds of others by means of eloquent speeches, logical statements and promises - true and untrue - are more likely to gain the approval of the masses, compared to others who are not knowledgeable nor logically enlightened, and who cannot speak convincingly.
On another note, people who make decisions based on their emotions may not perform well as entrepreneurs and may not be successful or wealthy in life and business as they would not be good risk takers. Entrepreneurship - to a large extent - requires logical analysis of businesses and the tendencies of such businesses to succeed. Such venture would therefore not go far, if decisions are made based on emotion. Risks would have to be taken and actions would have to be conducted that may hurt one too many feelings, but have to be done, for the benefit and long-term success of the firm.
This notwithstanding, there may be situations or scenarios where decisions by emotion can be essential. For example in raising a family, in loving someone who may have hurt one, in philanthropy and in caring for others, emotions play a major role in one's decisions and is thus, vital.
In conclusion, people ought to make decisions based on facts and logic, before emotions, and not based firstly on emotion, in order to arrive at excellent decisions that are good for the majority and would be justifiable to reasoning, when scrutinized in the law courts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, really, so, still, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 19.5258426966 164% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 34.0 14.8657303371 229% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 58.6224719101 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2623.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 538.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87546468401 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81610080973 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96663419319 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496282527881 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 838.8 704.065955056 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5164145934 60.3974514979 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.904761905 118.986275619 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.619047619 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.04761904762 5.21951772744 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323934744682 0.243740707755 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110860978363 0.0831039109588 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109952848502 0.0758088955206 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202648926715 0.150359130593 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793371534931 0.0667264976115 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.38706741573 102% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 100.480337079 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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