People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
When taking a particular decision, We must take into all the consequences of that particular decision. Sometimes, we may take a decision just on whim, which at instance seems perfectly alright but it will have huge aftereffects which could have avoided if the decision was taken with logic. For example, At the time of elections political leaders give freebies (or) introduce some reforms which in most cases are based on the fact that it might help them to get votes, but later there might be a economical disaster through particular chain of events caused by this reform. Leaders might think that , "It is not a big issue we will cover this later through developmental activities". But the decision which was taken on emotion rather than logic has resulted the damage which shows the poor decision making. So, it is mostly good to take a decision based on information and statistics rather than pure emotion.
Next, Most of the decisions which are taken on emotion are most prone to consequences which we might not guess and affect us in a negative way. Nut when we take a decision based on logic, then we analyze most of the possible cases and the risk we face in future is quite lowered. For example, When we want to buy something which is not affordable , we might have to take the decision based on logic rather than just going on emotion , If we go on emotion and if we buy that thing then we might be bankrupt in future and our situation is worsened. As we can see it is an example of poor decision making which we have to avoid.
But, Taking decision on logic at all times might also trun to be bad. We might also want to rely on emotion sometimes .For example, If someone is unable to pay us money and we might want to wave it off , Based on our logic it might be a loss to us but we might tend to go on emotion as to not worsen the relationship.
In conclusion, I think that when we need to take a decision we might want to have a mix of both emotions and logic rather than just relying only on logic or emotion.
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- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.3162921348 159% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 33.0505617978 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 2235.4752809 76% => OK
No of words: 386.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37305699482 5.05705443957 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51125539955 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.435233160622 0.4932671777 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.5125338546 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.846153846 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.6923076923 23.4991977007 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 5.21951772744 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22987716541 0.243740707755 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121343030807 0.0831039109588 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816443705424 0.0758088955206 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167931557653 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033567640497 0.0667264976115 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 48.8420337079 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 12.1743820225 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.66 12.1639044944 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.38706741573 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 100.480337079 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.