The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment.
The topic raises the controversial issue of whether the real talent of popular musician be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generation. There are many instances in which we have seen musician been the star of their time. And their stardom has even backout the veteran musicians, not all of them but some of the extremely great talent. Talent is something which keeps incrreasing exponentially with generations.
We should always see how far the person has gone into the depth. There are some musicians who are immortal and their eternal music is being know till date also their are musicians who have a strong charm to enlight the current public. Their popularity shouldn't be taken for granted. There always a replacement of everything may be in some cases this took time but if it has shown it's triat it shouldn't be ignored. Rather we should have the courage to took that person (musician) climb heights. Not being a sycophant but a true fan.
Musicians honest assessment is when he is alive, so that he should also realise the work he is doing is good for society. He is encouraging other talents. Helping society is numerous ways. Music is something that's fit better in all spectrum, whenever the situation is good or bad, party or lament. Whatsoever the situation may be music has the tendency to rejuvenate. Many singers/musicians after getting publicity, worked harder then they previously did and has embraked their names. For example Micheal Jackson he was popular for his music, after that he introspected and came out it music plus dance and moonwalk set the marks and it's authenticity is by jackson only. Rabindranath tagore, a freedom fighter who wrote national anthem for india. the song is written so beautifully, everyone around loves it irrespective of caste, religion and i would even say country. Because of the same reason in 1972 when Bangladesh was formed after getting partioned from Pakistan, they asked Rabindranath Tagore to write the national song from them as well. This is the fan moment that every musician wishes to carry with him in it's grave, he also wished to remain eternal but being the star of the genration is a feat everyone wish to privelidge.
First of all fame is something which is derived by public influence, if the fame is assesed by several generation that means it was so florid that everyone loves, but if the current generation is not able to judge the talent in the performer, it may become difficult for further generations to have their mind on him/her.
However, it's all how we percieve things. Getting the performer known for it's work, guiding him for his work if you could is the best we can get out of him and his fame would be eternal.
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- The real talent of a popular musician cannot accurately be assessed until the musician has been dead for several generations, so that his or her fame does not interfere with honest assessment. 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun generation seems to be countable; consider using: 'several generations'.
Suggestion: several generations
...ed until the musician has been dead for several generation. There are many instances in which we h...
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Suggestion: some
... veteran musicians, not all of them but some of the extremely great talent. Talent is somet...
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...rnal music is being know till date also their are musicians who have a strong charm t...
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...ht the current public. Their popularity shouldnt be taken for granted. There always a re...
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...k time but if it has shown its triat it shouldnt be ignored. Rather we should have the c...
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Suggestion: Rather,
...shown its triat it shouldnt be ignored. Rather we should have the courage to took that...
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...ty is numerous ways. Music is something thats fit better in all spectrum, whenever th...
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Suggestion: harder than
...sicians after getting publicity, worked harder then they previously did and has embraked th...
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...er who wrote national anthem for india. the song is written so beautifully, everyon...
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... it irrespective of caste, religion and i would even say country. Because of the ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun generation seems to be countable; consider using: 'several generations'.
Suggestion: several generations
...ic influence, if the fame is assesed by several generation that means it was so florid that everyo...
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Suggestion: it's; it is
...o have their mind on him/her. However, its all how we percieve things. Getting the...
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..., guiding him for his work if you could is the best we can get out of him and his ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, then, well, as for, for example, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 37.0 19.5258426966 189% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2254.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 468.0 442.535393258 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81623931624 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65116196802 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6167738336 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 215.323595506 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523504273504 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 702.0 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.3469373592 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9166666667 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 5.21951772744 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304656341113 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074522657428 0.0831039109588 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905887600051 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167825347652 0.150359130593 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918177159364 0.0667264976115 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.1639044944 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.