A society should prepare its young people for leadership in government or other industries by instilling a sense of cooperation than competition
We are living in a competitive world. The best is selected out after the competitions. People wants to be in leadership 'by hook or crook.' In such a scenario, is there any role for the cooperation? How should a society prepare its young people for leadership in government or other industries? By instilling a sense of cooperation or competition? Of course, competition is good to produce the best, but there are many disadvantages associated with that like rivalry, hatred and chicanery to reach the top spot.
If a society can prepare its young people with a sense of cooperation, that will produce quality young people for the future. In a world of selfishness and self promotion, the virtue of cooperation is rare, but that is necessary. The saying goes like this, "United we stand, divided we fall." If the people in the institutions, organizations, governments and groups could cooperate each other, that will ultimately benefit them for the smooth functioning.
Mohandas Gandhi, who is called as the "Father of the nation of India" learned this principle of cooperation. When India was under foreign powers, Indians were not cooperating together as all leaders wanted to be the supreme. But when Gandhi came to the scene, he promoted the sense of cooperation among the leaders and the people. To him, national needs should be given importance. Thus the competing leaders cooperated and at last India got its independence in1947.
We hear about factions in religious organizations who are supposed to be the channels of peace and cooperation. The competitions among the leaders lead those organizations into a downfall. What are the reasons behind most of the fights in the world, whether it is between nations or ethnic groups ? It is the competitive spirit. "I am the top, you obey me" mentality is increasing among some leaders who wants to lead their nation in hegemonic ways. Eventually, extremism and wars are increasing.
For today's society in general, which promotes selfishness, egalitarian society is a Utopian idea. But, if all could work together, they can bring a new generation for the future with a sense of cooperation and love. Thus, the society must strive to instill among the young, a sense of cooperation. As a result, the world will get the benefit. The world will be more peaceful and joyous.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, thus, in general, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1978.0 2235.4752809 88% => OK
No of words: 386.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12435233161 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02760128525 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551813471503 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1957772809 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0769230769 118.986275619 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 23.4991977007 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30769230769 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399248134414 0.243740707755 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105234187666 0.0831039109588 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148570622812 0.0758088955206 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225116816705 0.150359130593 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167690919833 0.0667264976115 251% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.1392134831 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.