The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
A better nation is always defined by the well being of its citizens. A great nation is one where nobody dies because of hunger or where every child is given a equal rights to education irrespective of the statuses. We live in a world were countries are competing to become the greatest of all the other. The bases of this decision is based on various factors like economy, education, science and technology, innovations, sports etc. At the end of the day what matters or measures the most is well being of a individual in the country. Hence, I feel well being of a citizen defines the nations greatness over others.
In developing countries like India, we have many resources to provide well being of the society. But due to the huge population we lag and we are yet to improve. Even though we are equal to other countries in providing brilliant Scientist, Engineers, Doctors, we are still called a developing country. This proves that giving birth to great people is not the only thing which defines the greatness of the country. In India majority of wealth lies in 10% of the population and hence most of the common citizens do not get enough resources to develop themselves. This difference is the real cause for economic status of the country. Therefore, even though we have some great hero's in every possible field, we still lag behind due to issues like poverty,child labour.
Secondly, if we peek into countries like United States and United Kingdom or Arab Countries we find a lot of improved state of living compared to India, China etc. Though all of them have given a equal contribution in providing great rulers, scientists, Doctors and experts in various other fields, we still call United states as a developed country. That is due to the well being of the society.This clearly implies that economy plays a very important role in considering the greatness of the nation rather than just few brilliant people.
On the other hand great rulers, scientists , artists do bring fame to their nation which helps a country to get recognized by the whole world. It also plays a very important role in the growth of a country. A great ruler can change the future of the nation by his innovative plans and strategies. An invention from a scientist can help a nation to lead in the science and technologies which will also help to improvise the economy and welfare of the nation. But all this will be just a part of growth and real success lies in the satisfactory life of a ordinary citizen.
Therefore, I would like to conclude by saying that, well being of the citizens is the major cause which defines the greatness of the nation. The welfare, security, happiness and comfort of a ordinary person will lead to a great nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, i feel, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2275.0 2235.4752809 102% => OK
No of words: 478.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75941422594 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67581127817 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62932671798 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47489539749 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3639434778 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9130434783 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7826086957 23.4991977007 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04347826087 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 10.2758426966 214% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142541298935 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440248487835 0.0831039109588 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467938353241 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885707692707 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307423707841 0.0667264976115 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 100.480337079 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.