Those who see their ideas through, regardless of doubts or criticism others may express, are the ones who tend to leave a lasting legacy
Ideas of people in this world are the reason for both the development and destruction of this world. The argument says people who does things regardless of what others think of it will leave a lasting legacy. I agree with the statement present in the argument to some extent.
Legendary scientists who have made great discoveries till date, have done their reasearch and came up with new thoughts irrespective of what people think of those ideas. For example galileo came up with a thought saying that earth is not flat but round, contrasting all peoples thoughts till then. If galileo didn't tell the world that the earth is round thinking of the criticsm he might get from others we would still be having erroneous notion of earth being flat. Not just galileo but all other scientists came out revealing their new inventions which might be new and which where totally against the beliefs people had till then, ignoring what people might think of their inventions. By doing that they wrote themselves some pages in the history.
Raghupathi ragav is a great freadom fighter from india who thought that child marriages are erroneous to the childrens future. So he took his stance against the child marriages which were prevailent and common in india back in mid 20th centuray. He took his stance against child marriages ignoring what other people might think and saved a lot of childrens future and lifes. Now he is treated as one of the greatest human beings the world had ever seen, just because he stood for a good cause ignoring the criticsms from people around him.
However as there are two sides for everything there is a negative side for this as well. A person can see through his ideas reardless of the criticism others express only until it his or her actions does'nt effect or diaturb others in the society. For example hitler killed a lot jews regardless of the consequences. Leaving him a negative or a bad image in the history.
So people who see through their thoughts which will do good to the world regardless of douts and criticsm they get from others will be remembered as good people in the history and they will leave themselves a legasy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... peoples thoughts till then. If galileo didnt tell the world that the earth is round ...
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... totally against the beliefs people had till then, ignoring what people might think ...
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...hemselves some pages in the history. Raghupathi ragav is a great freadom figh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, then, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 376.0 442.535393258 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77127659574 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39032279225 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 215.323595506 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.640785776 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.529411765 118.986275619 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1176470588 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05882352941 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192116835484 0.243740707755 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587476618961 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690694833082 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118073443782 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494227184232 0.0667264976115 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.8420337079 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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