To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Nowadays, it is an undeniable fact that people are tending to move to cities, leaving lots of villages forlorn. However, in my opinion, although main cities are a rich source of information for sociological studies, it is excessive to conclude from this that they are the only factor that defines its characteristics, as the cultural and economic contribution of villages is crucial to its development.
To exemplify this, there are a lot of traditions in villages which define the main aspects of different societies. In lots of traditional festivals in Spain, animal abuse is a common practice, as people find it amusing. The commonplaceness of this ritual in lots of towns in the country makes it be seen a normal activity, although, from a third country’s perspective, it may seem unconscious. This way of thinking is absolutely not due to the typical activities done in big cities.
However, although the facts presented in the last paragraph might hold true on most occasions, it is clear that the force of the statement depends on how urbanite the societies under study are. In the United States, the influence of rural life in states such as Texas or Alabama is incomparable to its importance in mostly urban states, such as New York or Florida. The picturesque image of an almost abandoned village where the sheriff of the city fights against the Indian people in western movies has nothing to share with the competitive societies shown in other films, such as The Wolf of Wall Street (taking in account, as well, the time difference between both ways of living). The main difference between those films is the state they take part in, as one is absolutely more rural than the other, and, in that one, the villages define the characteristics of the society more than the cities do.
In conclusion, I am convinced that, although the study of the major cities of a society is fundamental to determine its main characteristics, they are not the only source of information that should be taken in account, as the omission of the way of living in villages can lead to a misunderstanding of the behavior of societies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, third, well, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 361.0 442.535393258 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91412742382 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00202636168 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 215.323595506 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542936288089 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.0901133839 60.3974514979 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.272727273 118.986275619 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.8181818182 23.4991977007 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.21951772744 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0990214704538 0.243740707755 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356613177866 0.0831039109588 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0206154233445 0.0758088955206 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.054393079892 0.150359130593 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0219983708141 0.0667264976115 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 14.1392134831 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 48.8420337079 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 12.1743820225 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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