To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Studying the major cities of society reveals its most important characteristics. While major cities only represent a portion of an entire society, it does act as a centeralizing point for that area. Major cities will represent a good overview and summary of the surrounding societies.
Since major cities attract business and entertainment from the surrounding areas it can represent what that societies economics and interests are. If the major city has a lot of sport stadiums and concert halls it shows that that society heavily values sport and music. If the city has busy streets and densily packed skyscrapers it can show booming economic sucess and what that society excels in. If the society is doing well economically it will be seen in its major city. With more money comes galleries, malls, skyscrappers, entertainment, public amenities, and the look of everyday people.
Major cities attract people. People are attracted things they enjoy and things that they can relate to. Two of those things are religion and culture. When a culture or religion becomes large and influential enough to be an important characteristic it can be clearly seen when studying major cities. For example when studying a major city such as Los Angelos one can see the major characteristic of Asian influence in its society. While having a China town, Korea town, and Japan town it can be that there is a demand for such culture in that society.
Major cities are usually the epicenter of activity in a society. If the society is doing well economically, the major city will show it. If the society has a heavy influence due to religious or politically ideology it will be seen and represented in its major city. The chracteristics of society are created from the people or environment of that area. Since major cities are the centers of society, I beleive that the most important characteristics of a society can be learned from studying its major cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'societies'' or 'society's'?
Suggestion: societies'; society's
...unding areas it can represent what that societies economics and interests are. If the maj...
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Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sucess and what that society excels in. If the society is doing well economically ...
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Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...sucess and what that society excels in. If the society is doing well economically ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'look', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.265536723164 0.240241500013 111% => OK
Verbs: 0.146892655367 0.157235817809 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0988700564972 0.0880659088768 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0367231638418 0.0497285424764 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0480225988701 0.0444667217837 108% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118644067797 0.12292977631 97% => OK
Participles: 0.045197740113 0.0406280797675 111% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.85431014267 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00847457627119 0.030933414821 27% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0960451977401 0.0997080785238 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0310734463277 0.0249443105267 125% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0141242937853 0.0148568991511 95% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1959.0 2732.02544248 72% => OK
No of words: 325.0 452.878318584 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02769230769 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.341538461538 0.366273622748 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.267692307692 0.280924506359 95% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.166153846154 0.200843997647 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.107692307692 0.132149295362 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85431014267 2.79330140395 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 219.290929204 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.461538461538 0.48968727796 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.0971950118 55.4138127331 83% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.1052631579 23.380412469 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5032673772 59.4972553346 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.105263158 141.124799967 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1052631579 23.380412469 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.368421052632 0.674092028746 55% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 43.8744939271 51.4728631049 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.85365853659 1.64882698954 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342276394074 0.391690518653 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.171200982042 0.123202303941 139% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0866975074898 0.077325440228 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.539296375893 0.547984918172 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.12695015639 0.149214159877 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156299201038 0.161403998019 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805610904993 0.0892212321368 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.36376183423 0.385218514788 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0186219619394 0.0692045440612 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260311478493 0.275328986314 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729240326917 0.0653680567796 112% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.4325221239 125% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 7.22455752212 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 3.66592920354 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.