To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Studying the major cities of a society to ascertain its important characteristics is not a criteria that the result obtained would be valid for all other cities. It will be unwise to just conclude that to get the important characteristics of United States of America, one should just study major cities like New York and Texas with out studying little cities like Arkansas. Information obtained from those cities cannot be used to conclude for other cities.
Information obtained from major cities cannot be assumed to correlate with other cities. Just studying major cities alone won't give a valid information about the performance of other cities. For example, conducting a census in New York City and obtaining a result as being populated by a number of people does not mean the same thing that Arkansas is also over populated with people when the number of people who live in a small city like Arkansas is smaller in number compared to the number of people who live in big city New York City.
The understanding of a society characteristics cannot be obtained by mere studying just its major cities alone. This will create a false impression that all cities are equal. Lets consider how people live in New York. People who are in New York City, without doubt live an expensive life. Concluding that the way people who are in New York live is the same as people who are in Arkansas would be wrong. This fact would render the characteristic performance of the other city invalid and worthless.
In conclusion, obtaining the characteristic performance of major cities cannot be used to conclude for other cities. This will not only lead to an invalid conclusion but will also make other cities worthless of their performance. The way to get a vivid understanding of a society characteristic performance is to carefully study all of its city.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 90, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a criterion' or simply 'criteria'?
Suggestion: a criterion; criteria
...in its important characteristics is not a criteria that the result obtained would be valid...
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Line 1, column 328, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...dy major cities like New York and Texas with out studying little cities like Arkansas. I...
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Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ork City and obtaining a result as being populated by a number of people does not...
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Line 3, column 459, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: smaller
...o live in a small city like Arkansas is smaller in number compared to the number of people who li...
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Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...e impression that all cities are equal. Lets consider how people live in New York. P...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'for example', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258823529412 0.238963963785 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.167647058824 0.154291517835 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.102941176471 0.0886310499679 116% => OK
Adverbs: 0.05 0.0506014161523 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0147058823529 0.0449626384858 33% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135294117647 0.123526278965 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0529411764706 0.0379742944744 139% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83447987267 2.82910677849 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0294117647059 0.0316879551592 93% => OK
Particles: 0.00294117647059 0.0014075125626 209% => Less particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.102941176471 0.0950106342287 108% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0352941176471 0.0245489744465 144% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0205882352941 0.0157978311181 130% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1855.0 2899.98275862 64% => OK
No of words: 313.0 478.390804598 65% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92651757188 6.0591788892 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.65681771538 90% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.338658146965 0.369966551584 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.214057507987 0.285172536893 75% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.172523961661 0.207245337619 83% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.111821086262 0.136322040163 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83447987267 2.82910677849 100% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 234.298850575 52% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.392971246006 0.492565540709 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 38.1523843765 56.8184620615 67% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 21.1264367816 71% => OK
Sentence length: 20.8666666667 23.7468607788 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5745454443 62.0618507366 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.666666667 143.81877709 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 23.7468607788 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.728815259664 55% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.87931034483 82% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.71264367816 65% => OK
Readability: 42.2724174654 52.2641144681 81% => OK
Elegance: 1.92405063291 1.64547068916 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322849483899 0.39480681544 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.211356969726 0.11556216369 183% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.160566877136 0.0736162880345 218% => Ideas in sentences are similar.
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.543365812257 0.531340600358 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.169704255886 0.15197228837 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146286244678 0.158818324754 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802684073101 0.0851127212816 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.397967875012 0.388921930462 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0921335689712 0.0677916285025 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245794138263 0.28015025965 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298878652851 0.0610219844235 49% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.8591954023 55% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30459770115 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.96264367816 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.10632183908 62% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 3.93390804598 127% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 3.04597701149 131% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 15.0862068966 93% => OK
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Rates: 62.5 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 3.75 Out of 6