To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
We all know how important cities are in any society. These are the places where the development is always high and places where people enjoy maximum luxury. This is what the statement above is trying to convey. It states that to understand the characteristics of any society, one must study its major cities. Yes, the statement is pretty true and we all know how important cities are in any society. But, it’s a little ambiguous because when one wants to study characteristics of society then one must study its villages and town and that is where the real characteristic of the society leaves.
However, many get to a point that there will be no forwardness in the nation without cities. Yes, that’s true because cities are home for IT industries, government offices, and whatnot. But, one must realize that if individuals in villages and towns stop working these industries and offices will also closed because in any society villages play a major role in agriculture. So, villages and towns may not have big industries but their significance is unique.
Finally, what I want to conclude is a village is something which is neglected in many cases. Although, The major population leaves in here. It's never that villages are inferior. But, when you want to understand the characteristics of a society one must study both the cities and villages because cities are where technology and development leaves and villages are where the real society leaves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...characteristic of the society leaves. However, many get to a point that there ...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun get seems to be countable; consider using: 'many gets'.
Suggestion: many gets
...the society leaves. However, many get to a point that there will be no forwar...
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Suggestion: close
... these industries and offices will also closed because in any society villages play a ...
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...ies but their significance is unique. Finally, what I want to conclude is a v...
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...nce is unique. Finally, what I want to conclude is a village is somethi...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...thing which is neglected in many cases. Although, The major population leaves in here. I...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...h, The major population leaves in here. Its never that villages are inferior. But, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, so, then, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 58.6224719101 34% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 2235.4752809 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 244.0 442.535393258 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02049180328 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81239529949 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 215.323595506 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487704918033 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.2508657241 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19931030332 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0701837672377 0.0831039109588 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755827795687 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131388217682 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606701572252 0.0667264976115 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 14.1392134831 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.1639044944 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 100.480337079 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.