To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The statement claims that the to understand the significant characteristics of a society, one
must study its major cities. Major cities are the locations which are ones more prone to drastic changes,
as it can be seen from the historical context. I totally agree with the statement, as it cities
which provide us with the diverse features that are prevailing which can be attributed to the
development that these cities have noticed since past times.
The primary reason being why the statement is appropriate is that the major cities which are
present today have taken a long time to develop as due to many historical reasons. The role
of ancient events have shaped these cities into a critical shape that represents various essential
features of society. As these cities were the ones which were the first to be resided by human populations
in the given area. Due to the inhabitation of these cities by human populations have shaped them into
major hubs which can be used as residential,promotional,transportations and for various other purposes.
For example, most archaeologists and historians have founded the items of historical importance from these major cities.
The second reason being that the major cities have attracted diverse population from many sections of
society due to their facilities. These diverse populations when get resided in these cities influence the
societal development of these cities. Also as it is noticed that in any country the major cities are the
locations which have the highest population, the presence of such a vast population makes it easy to
understand various aspects of a society.
The third reason being the the kind of ambience which these major cities provide to its denizens
makes it possible for them to expand their capabilities to derive some fruitful outcome. In such
a situation it would be easy to get response from every individual of a society. This will in turn
facilitate the societal understanding and development which can be understood by interviewing or
sharing the experience of individuals.
However, not in every way we can say that major cities are the only source to understand the
crucial characteristics of a society. As it is noticed that there are many cities which though
being not regarded as major cities have helped in a better way to understand the social and
cultural features of a society.
In sum, the statement is appropriate in stating that major cities are the ones which serve as
a rich source to extrapolate the important characteristics of a society. These societies have
mae it easy for historians to carry out their task to understand the important characteristics
of a society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, third, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 19.5258426966 128% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.3162921348 194% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 33.0505617978 118% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2334.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 439.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31662870159 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28945790516 2.79657885939 118% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 215.323595506 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.405466970387 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 730.8 704.065955056 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4361275509 60.3974514979 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 129.666666667 118.986275619 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3888888889 23.4991977007 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 29.0 4.97078651685 583% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 37.0 7.80617977528 474% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233974959152 0.243740707755 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102585654632 0.0831039109588 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069086652323 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0797099744088 0.150359130593 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614297276715 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 48.8420337079 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 100.480337079 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.