The value of works of art, whether they are literature, music, sculpture or film, depends on how many people understand them.
The value of works of art like literature, music, sculpture or film depends on how many people understand them. I partially agree with the topic as there are various forms of art prevalent in today's world and it is not necessary that people follow them just on the basis of thier understanding. There are people who have no taste in art whatsover they follow it to kill boredom or several other reasons. Take For example music: it is followed by millions of people worldwide yet only a fraction of people understand it.
In additon to music there is dance which is also followed by people for just fun, not everyone understands the various styles of dances but they do enjoy it in pubs, marriages and other occasions. I believe there are two categories of people: the one who understands the art and other who just follow it. For intsance film industry is one of the most popular art form. There are films which have a good story but not enough people to recognize it or merit it. On the other hand there are films which have a huge popularity among people just because of thier famous celebrity casting in the film; which has no good story still it runs successfully.
Secondly, I find music very closer to films in poularity. Here also the story is same what is good is recognized by only a handful of people. Forn instance take Classical music which is very soothing and requires a great piece of mastery to sing as it is understood only by handful and rest just listens to latest electronic music which is very easy to create in software.
Thirdly, one cannot ignore that literature also holds a rightful place in art forms. The great literary work by famous personalities like shakeshpeare is read by only handful of people and undertood by a tiny number.
In conclusion, art is not understood by lot of people yet it is cherished by many. People follow art for various reasons it is not necessary that they understand it.
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...styles of dances but they do enjoy it in pubs, marriages and other occasions. I b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 58.6224719101 78% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 2235.4752809 71% => OK
No of words: 344.0 442.535393258 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64534883721 5.05705443957 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54667090932 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473837209302 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.852114017 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.875 118.986275619 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 5.21951772744 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373500975299 0.243740707755 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138778584902 0.0831039109588 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180229891475 0.0758088955206 238% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203231464987 0.150359130593 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.150087192312 0.0667264976115 225% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 48.8420337079 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.1639044944 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.38706741573 93% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 100.480337079 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.