The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Government is an essential part of a society. It is essential to have an institution that can manage various aspects of a society such as health and education.
I tend to agree a suggestion that wellbeing of a society is enhanced when authorities are questioned by members of the society.
Leading IT companies such as Google and Netflix champion for a transparent culture and promote continuous feedback. Continuous feedback initiative makes a manager and a subordinate consistently exchange their feedbacks and challenge each other. Such an approach helps these companies to evolve because it ensures that a manager and individual contributor are on the same page. Furthermore, continuous feedback allows to immediately act in case of any discrepancies. If any of participants disagree, an opponent can either prove its correctness or pivot and adapt.
I believe governments have to be constantly questioned by their countries' citizens. Prosperous countries have elections to regularly ask for people's opinion and let citizens choose whom to entrust their future. Fair elections help countries to evolve because they account for input of different layers of citizens and, eventually, help society to reach a consensus. Usually, governments do not require to deal with rocket science to improve well being of a society. It is sometimes enough to maintain equal access to a country's goods among different groups of people to promote self awareness and let people decide how to dispose what they have in the most efficient way. In this form elections are inevitable to hear voice of everyone.
Nevertheless, it is always important to keep a balance and allow authorities to act quickly and autonomously in case of emergencies. Such a level of independcy can be entrusted to a government through elections.
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- The well being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority 58
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 403, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dealing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: dealing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1530.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 287.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33101045296 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13641884791 2.79657885939 112% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585365853659 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7575991293 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.625 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3125 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19578999566 0.243740707755 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551046597011 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076330558643 0.0758088955206 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115075258883 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107532884212 0.0667264976115 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 14.1392134831 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.1639044944 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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