The world.
The world is beautiful. Sounds ethnic, doesn't it? Well, I beg to differ. The world's only beautiful for those who get to reach the heights, for others it's about fighting depression, making a living, making the most out of what they get and eventually dying with regrets. While the successful ones often say we all are born same but again I beg to differ. For every time somebody wants to go up, climb up, he/she looks down whether they fall would they they die or would they be safe so get it a new try. The cushion to fall back on is one of the most important things for any person to go ahead without fearing. The fear of losing everything is what keeps billions off from being successful.
Mark Zuckerberg, the CEO of Facebook inc. had once said, if he wasn't a Harvard student he probably wouldn't have dropped out and the Facebook that we see today would've never come into existence. People going to Harvard don't fear of dropping out because they already have the cushion fall back on, the protection and the question that don't have to ask that the students from the tier two colleges ask which is " What next? " .
However, it's not just the shield that helps a person to become successful, it's also the mindset. Mindset is again one important factor. The mindset of being stubborn on not giving up at any cost is again one of the most important factors that help a person grow fast and long.
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- The world 30
- There is a school of thought that says that the most experienced workers should be promoted to management However some businesses prefer to select manages based on their perceived leadership skills regardless of how much experience they have 33
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ould they they die or would they be safe so get it a new try. The cushion to fall...
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...es ask which is ' What next? ' . However, its not just the shield that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.9520958084 15% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 28.8173652695 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 55.5748502994 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 16.3942115768 18% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 2260.96107784 51% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 257.0 441.139720559 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47081712062 5.12650576532 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.56307096286 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23043409403 2.78398813304 80% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 204.123752495 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610894941634 0.468620217663 130% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 705.55239521 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.59920159681 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.8473053892 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 66.7207780397 57.8364921388 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0714285714 119.503703932 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3571428571 23.324526521 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 5.70786347227 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.25449101796 266% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.073286649453 0.218282227539 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469688990032 0.0743258471296 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145734807247 0.0701772020484 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0373802370543 0.128457276422 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528636382068 0.0628817314937 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 14.3799401198 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 48.3550499002 163% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 12.197005988 56% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.5979740519 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.32208582834 82% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 98.500998004 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 12.3882235529 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.1389221557 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.9071856287 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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